Connections
An entry in the What is Love contest10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Navada,
This is a well done poem that reminds us there a so many different kinds of love in this world. I like how each stanza starts with a Greek word meaning love and goes on to define it poetically.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Hi Navada,
This is a well done poem that reminds us there a so many different kinds of love in this world. I like how each stanza starts with a Greek word meaning love and goes on to define it poetically.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much! :)
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Don't mention it, Navada.
Joan
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good form, and I like how you have broken down the various forms of love. Sadly, in our language, we love this and we love that and we love this and we love that I love my cat. I love my friends I love my God and it's all just one word, but you have broken down the Origins of the different words and I enjoyed reading it. Have a
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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This is a very good form, and I like how you have broken down the various forms of love. Sadly, in our language, we love this and we love that and we love this and we love that I love my cat. I love my friends I love my God and it's all just one word, but you have broken down the Origins of the different words and I enjoyed reading it. Have a
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from Jim Wile
This was so well done, Navada, in giving us a very different view of love than we are used to. I had heard of Eros and Agape, but never realized all those others were also Greek gods of different aspects of love. You can see through their names where different words in our language come from as well as their meanings. This was an educational as well as an interesting free verse poem. Beautifully written. - Jim
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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This was so well done, Navada, in giving us a very different view of love than we are used to. I had heard of Eros and Agape, but never realized all those others were also Greek gods of different aspects of love. You can see through their names where different words in our language come from as well as their meanings. This was an educational as well as an interesting free verse poem. Beautifully written. - Jim
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much for your detailed and thoughtful response, Jim - much appreciated! :) Thanks also for the generous six stars!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You are writing like gangbusters. Not Another Christmas offering. You write well. My mailbox is overflowing I have 68 messages alone.
I am getting through them all. I am having to be selfish. If they don't review me at least once a week, or offer me massive points I no longer review them. I don't have the time. Happy Holidays. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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You are writing like gangbusters. Not Another Christmas offering. You write well. My mailbox is overflowing I have 68 messages alone.
I am getting through them all. I am having to be selfish. If they don't review me at least once a week, or offer me massive points I no longer review them. I don't have the time. Happy Holidays. Karen
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much, Karen. I really appreciate your time and feedback! :)
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent ... a five star masterpiece its great in its descriptive intuitive relentless pursuit also its adamant testimony to the variety of kind and also embraces the spectrum at large with good insight and merriment. Liked it very much !
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Excellent ... a five star masterpiece its great in its descriptive intuitive relentless pursuit also its adamant testimony to the variety of kind and also embraces the spectrum at large with good insight and merriment. Liked it very much !
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you! :)
Comment from BethShelby
This is good. I was familiar with about four of the types of love but the others make sense as well. :Love has many faces and I guess it would be well to develop all of them to deeper levels. Love is important. If everyone practiced love for all humanity we might eliminate war.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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This is good. I was familiar with about four of the types of love but the others make sense as well. :Love has many faces and I guess it would be well to develop all of them to deeper levels. Love is important. If everyone practiced love for all humanity we might eliminate war.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thanks, Beth! :)
Comment from Janis M.
Agape love is the best love there is. But agape as humans are able to express is no where close to the love of the Father. Which to me is always amazing to think about what I see as extreme forms of love and to know that there is much more
I think you did a great job here with exploring multiple aspects. Lately I have been writing on the more lustful side of love but as shared between a husband and wife similar to Song of Solomon. Of course I will never be able to compare to poetry from God, but it does help to know that it is OKAY to have lust for your spouse.
Some very zealous religious communities see it as bad.
Anyway that is a tangent. I also like that you included the Greek words. Even more interesting is that Koine
Greek and classical Greek sometimes have different meanings for the same word. Not unlike how English has evolved as well,
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Agape love is the best love there is. But agape as humans are able to express is no where close to the love of the Father. Which to me is always amazing to think about what I see as extreme forms of love and to know that there is much more
I think you did a great job here with exploring multiple aspects. Lately I have been writing on the more lustful side of love but as shared between a husband and wife similar to Song of Solomon. Of course I will never be able to compare to poetry from God, but it does help to know that it is OKAY to have lust for your spouse.
Some very zealous religious communities see it as bad.
Anyway that is a tangent. I also like that you included the Greek words. Even more interesting is that Koine
Greek and classical Greek sometimes have different meanings for the same word. Not unlike how English has evolved as well,
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thanks for a very detailed and thoughtful review, Janis! :)
Comment from June Sargent
You nailed it. Society is obsessed with Eros and also narcissistic self love. We need more agape love. I enjoyed this well researched piece that highlights the different facets of love. The Greeks had it right!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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You nailed it. Society is obsessed with Eros and also narcissistic self love. We need more agape love. I enjoyed this well researched piece that highlights the different facets of love. The Greeks had it right!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you, June - I really appreciate your positive feedback and generous six stars! :)
Comment from JSD
Agape was central to the Christian idea of love I think. Intelligent writing exploring these definitions a really cleverly put together. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Agape was central to the Christian idea of love I think. Intelligent writing exploring these definitions a really cleverly put together. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much! I just wanted to avoid the tropes and do something different. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a special post, very cleverly rhymed and I adored the sentiment and reckon this could be a winner for the contest, a skilful post from a talented pen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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This is a special post, very cleverly rhymed and I adored the sentiment and reckon this could be a winner for the contest, a skilful post from a talented pen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly! :)
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You are most welcome, I love your work x x x
