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Races

a 5-7-5

12 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao!

the beauty of this bouquet made me open the page.

I love autumn, love its vibrant sunset/sunrise hues which I see reflected in this stunning piece of artwork.

I also see the 4 colours of the human race :
Black , Red ,Yellow and White.

PS: I would have made the background black to enhance even more those gorgeous colours.




 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2023
    Thank you, T
Comment from judiverse
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We're very much influenced by colors. Great artwork choice. It shows the emotional impact of colors. The words "colors race" illustrate that the colors in a work of art can stir the emotions. avmurray is a great artist.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
    Thanks, Judi
Comment from Daylily
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Congratulations on this Milestone Posting, Bill! 3,000 really is a marvelous achievement!

I like your message, too. I am a very color oriented person and even though we are on the cusp of winter here in the USA, spring colors are flooding into my mind right now after reading this 5-7-5 poem accompanied by the lovely bouquet.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
    Wow, thank you, Daylily.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Bill.
-Congratulations on post number 3,000.
-That is a lot of posting.
-A good topic and imagery
with personification of colors.
-I like the concluding line very
much because it shows that
some people maybe had their
eyes opened for the first time.
-It could also refer to wanting
a change and seeing the colors
was a way to take action and change.
-Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Pam
reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Dec-2023
    You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from nomi338
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Color is so essential to life. In fact the absence of colors indicates the absence of life. A person with no color on their cheeks is thought to be sick. Persons who think of themselves with no color are considered dull and lifeless. Language that entertains is often considered to be colorful language. Color is vital to life.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    All true.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Congrats Bill on your 3000th milestone post.

Reading your poems and other FanStorians I typically review does witness a new life on many levels regardless of the tints that move into my mind.

Of course, I favor the format this one is created in.

I too use avmurray for my post illustrations - good choice.

Mark

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Mark
Comment from Navada
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What a striking use of visual and written imagery to celebrate your 3000th post - what an amazing milestone!! I really like the idea of abstract art reflecting the nature of humanity in that different colours coming together can stimulate new ideas and fruitfulness. You wish that was always the reaction in this situation throughout the world. Thanks for the share.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Navada
Comment from karenina
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Milestone 3,000? Holy cow, Bill. That's an amazing number! Congratulations to you! You've penned a perfect 5-7-5 to mark the occasion...and I'm looking forward to your NEXT 3,000!

(No pressure though---LOL)

Karenina

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    That is about a year and a half, every day...twice.
reply by karenina on 09-Dec-2023
    Talk about commitment!
Comment from Sally Law
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First, congratulations on your milestone post! 3000! Wow Bill that's a lot. How did you do that? I feel like I write all the time and I just crossed 750. Wonderful poem for your milestone post and beautifully illustrated as always.

Sending my best today as always, and my best congratulations for your accomplishments.
Your friend and fan,
Sally Bobally xoxo

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    Thank you, Sally. I feel like an imposter around folks like you. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
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I did a double take on the "colors race" as I wasn't sure if the topic was going to be about colors or race. But "calm observers" can appreciate all different colors in the world or among the skin of humans.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2023
    ...and we are calm observers.