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Love lives on.!
2 total reviews
Comment from
kiwisteveh
The repeated structure you employ adds strength and solidity to your poem and also allows for a progression to a strong ending.
This appears to be a love poem addressed to a loved one who is absent - this is subtly conveyed in the reference to a tearstained face.
Excellent piece and I wish you good luck in the contest - this should do well.
Steve
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
Steve, thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
When we have loved deeply, that feeling never leaves us and we remember the good times with fondness when we reflect, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
Thank you for your review!
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