Morning Glory!
Septolet11 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Very creative and in your words I feel the solitude and peacefulness that comes with daybreak. Your poem is smooth and reads well. I look forward to reading more of your quality poetry.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Very creative and in your words I feel the solitude and peacefulness that comes with daybreak. Your poem is smooth and reads well. I look forward to reading more of your quality poetry.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem and giving me this kind review..
Comment from Ginda Simpson
A septolet poem that reads like a hymn. How often do we enjoy the early morning and take for granted the miracles we are witness to? Thank you for writing and sharing this with us today.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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A septolet poem that reads like a hymn. How often do we enjoy the early morning and take for granted the miracles we are witness to? Thank you for writing and sharing this with us today.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Tank you very much
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your image is dark; the words that you have written have a spring feeling to the poem. When there are squirrels, birds, and buds that are forming, there should be more of a dazzling display of image color.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Your image is dark; the words that you have written have a spring feeling to the poem. When there are squirrels, birds, and buds that are forming, there should be more of a dazzling display of image color.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Wendy G
You have created a very nice septolet poem with delightful words. However I did find it hard to read with a small font against such a bright background. Nevertheless, best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You have created a very nice septolet poem with delightful words. However I did find it hard to read with a small font against such a bright background. Nevertheless, best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much,I will keep that in mind. I am not good with the advanced editor ,I use it so that the font can be bigger .I will try to correct it in future.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a great poem! You have b, m, and w alliteration. It looks like you did an excellent job with the form. I enjoyed reading this poem that brought a scene alive with action verbs and even some personification (Wind whispered).
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This is a great poem! You have b, m, and w alliteration. It looks like you did an excellent job with the form. I enjoyed reading this poem that brought a scene alive with action verbs and even some personification (Wind whispered).
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for this encouraging review.
Comment from Julie Lau
I have never read a better poem within this tight format. The first verse has a lovely rhythmic movement going on; the second is a masterpiece of alliteration. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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I have never read a better poem within this tight format. The first verse has a lovely rhythmic movement going on; the second is a masterpiece of alliteration. Congratulations!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for this honour. You have made me happy today.
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned septolet you have here, mystery poet. A unique form and very haiku like with a nature theme.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Beautifully penned septolet you have here, mystery poet. A unique form and very haiku like with a nature theme.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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thank you very much for this lovely review. sorry for my delayed reply.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is uplifting and magical as there is so much going on outside if only we open our eyes and see it all. You did not miss a thing here and I enjoyed your few words about our abundant nature, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This is uplifting and magical as there is so much going on outside if only we open our eyes and see it all. You did not miss a thing here and I enjoyed your few words about our abundant nature, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for this encouraging review sorry for the delayed reply.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You've done a great job of connecting the first part with the second using the words "glory" and "miracles", as we could interpret this as God's glory and his miracles.
Very descriptive - sounds like a beautiful beginning of spring.
One suggestion on presentation - I would center your words under the picture (they are very close to the image and a farther distance from the bottom of the box). You could edit and hit the space bar a couple of times to center it better. I would also make the font slightly larger - you have a big message told in small font.
Good luck with the contest.
Pam
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You've done a great job of connecting the first part with the second using the words "glory" and "miracles", as we could interpret this as God's glory and his miracles.
Very descriptive - sounds like a beautiful beginning of spring.
One suggestion on presentation - I would center your words under the picture (they are very close to the image and a farther distance from the bottom of the box). You could edit and hit the space bar a couple of times to center it better. I would also make the font slightly larger - you have a big message told in small font.
Good luck with the contest.
Pam
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you pam for your kind words .I will
keep your suggestion in mind .I am not good with advanced editor ...I will haveto try
I am sorry forthe delay in reply.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The picture is evocative and complements the poem. The last two lines are effective in summing up the overall mood and tone. There is something magical about dawn!
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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The picture is evocative and complements the poem. The last two lines are effective in summing up the overall mood and tone. There is something magical about dawn!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much .I am sorry for the delayed reply.
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Best wishes from Cambridge, Uk on a dull April Day!
