Perfection
Simply what the art gave me19 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
I love this! Worthy of a ten. The image immediately caught my eye. You have a wonderful ability to express passion in your words. I can tell you are an empath. You feel emotions deeply and are easily capable of expressing them.
Great writing!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I love this! Worthy of a ten. The image immediately caught my eye. You have a wonderful ability to express passion in your words. I can tell you are an empath. You feel emotions deeply and are easily capable of expressing them.
Great writing!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hello my beautiful friend. This review touched me. I want to thank you for always being there being one of the ones I first see in any reviews I get.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You're very welcome :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This piece was difficult to read and I think you would do yourself a favor with a larger size font, and a more 'popping' color for the letters, but even more is once I saw the photo encrypted it was hard to seek out what was written. Mesmerizing. :-) I loved it.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This piece was difficult to read and I think you would do yourself a favor with a larger size font, and a more 'popping' color for the letters, but even more is once I saw the photo encrypted it was hard to seek out what was written. Mesmerizing. :-) I loved it.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I tried enlarging but I guess not enough but I truly appreciate you suffering through and learning this wonderful review, Tom.
:)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Leaving not learning?geesh
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I don't understand. Leaving. Learning> ? Baffles me. :-O
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Now I understand the other post posted.
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I?m glad because I was getting lost! Giggling
Comment from poetwatch
Perfection is in the eye of the beholder, Justafan. Yet, after closer examinations, the flaws appear. :) Yet, if she is anything like the image shown... then I have to say, "Perfection!" This is a good entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Perfection is in the eye of the beholder, Justafan. Yet, after closer examinations, the flaws appear. :) Yet, if she is anything like the image shown... then I have to say, "Perfection!" This is a good entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you kindly for this wonderful review :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Very nicely written. The art work is perfection for this poetry. Keep up the good work. The repetition is very pleasing, especially, read out loud.
Brigitte
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Very nicely written. The art work is perfection for this poetry. Keep up the good work. The repetition is very pleasing, especially, read out loud.
Brigitte
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Always
Justafan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, the artwork says it all. Perfect, she was perfection. The beautiful body of a woman is still young and full of desire. It is captivating as was the poem. The red lettering was also enticing. The presentation as a whole was dynamite! This speaks loudly of the man and woman closely and firmly reaching for each other and then the kiss of a lifetime!
Jesse
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Yes, the artwork says it all. Perfect, she was perfection. The beautiful body of a woman is still young and full of desire. It is captivating as was the poem. The red lettering was also enticing. The presentation as a whole was dynamite! This speaks loudly of the man and woman closely and firmly reaching for each other and then the kiss of a lifetime!
Jesse
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hi Jesse, I?m glad you enjoyed this work :)
Every review we get helps us to become better at our craft. :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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I am so glad I helped you to become better at your craft!
Jesse
Comment from amahra
This was a grand Love Poem Poetry Contest entry. I liked the repeated lines, "Perfect...she was perfection". Also, I liked the black background with the bright red font.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This was a grand Love Poem Poetry Contest entry. I liked the repeated lines, "Perfect...she was perfection". Also, I liked the black background with the bright red font.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hi there "A". I?ve been busy busy during the holidays but hopefully I will be here more often and can catch up on your work as well.
Thank you for the lovely review :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Missy, it beauty and it's perfection. I wish I didn't have to say anything else, but that wouldn't be accepted. I whish you the best of luck with this beauty. All best, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Aw, Missy, it beauty and it's perfection. I wish I didn't have to say anything else, but that wouldn't be accepted. I whish you the best of luck with this beauty. All best, Ulla xx
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Thank you, my lovely friend. This review is perfect. :)
Wishing you a wonderful new year.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
This reflects a woman who is sensual and seductive which the photograph illustrates. The man is so under her spell, he hardly plays an active role;
The colour font is appropriate and the free verse is well handled.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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This reflects a woman who is sensual and seductive which the photograph illustrates. The man is so under her spell, he hardly plays an active role;
The colour font is appropriate and the free verse is well handled.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hello Sarah, thank you for the lovely review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love how you never had "him" come out of the trance he was in. The imagery was perfect. It was like he was entrance while looking at a s ulpture. This was brilliantly presented. Imagery, perfect. The repeated line, perfect. The picture was even spot on. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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I love how you never had "him" come out of the trance he was in. The imagery was perfect. It was like he was entrance while looking at a s ulpture. This was brilliantly presented. Imagery, perfect. The repeated line, perfect. The picture was even spot on. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Hello Gretchen, I?m glad you found this to your liking.
I shall return the favor.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from karenina
So much to love about this! The restraint with which you evoked passion and desire allows me to hover there... Between the lines...
Imagining. Remembering!
Stunning!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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So much to love about this! The restraint with which you evoked passion and desire allows me to hover there... Between the lines...
Imagining. Remembering!
Stunning!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2023
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Aww Karenina, what a lovely review. Thank you so much. It?s an honor getting a review from someone you respect so much.
Again, thank you
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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How kind to say! The feeling is mutual!
