Sun Catcher
A Lyric Essay.36 total reviews
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
This would definitely make a hot song!!! For, you
paint a very vivid picture that gives your reader a
better understanding. And you definitely have the
skills to pay the bills. Keep Writing. And I will be looking
forward to seeing you, when you stop by my spot to
enjoy some of my poetry. Stay Connected.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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This would definitely make a hot song!!! For, you
paint a very vivid picture that gives your reader a
better understanding. And you definitely have the
skills to pay the bills. Keep Writing. And I will be looking
forward to seeing you, when you stop by my spot to
enjoy some of my poetry. Stay Connected.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your warm regard.
Your comments encourage me to continue writing.
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No problem. And if you would like to know more about what I do, you can catch me at... www.reverbnation .com/titanblack222 Just type it all in the address box.
Comment from tfawcus
Beautiful imagery in this uplifting piece of writing, Nancy. You write of the indomitable human spirit that overcomes darkness, banishing it with light. A brave face in tragic circumstances. Such courage.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Beautiful imagery in this uplifting piece of writing, Nancy. You write of the indomitable human spirit that overcomes darkness, banishing it with light. A brave face in tragic circumstances. Such courage.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much...
Comment from Cogitator
Enjoyable without question. I do think that fewer adjectives and unnecessary words would improve the work (personal opinion). I will come back and see if you agree...John
I changed it
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Enjoyable without question. I do think that fewer adjectives and unnecessary words would improve the work (personal opinion). I will come back and see if you agree...John
I changed it
Comment Written 02-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Hitcher
The death of any child is heartbreaking but when it is one of your own, son, daughter, grandson, granddaughter the grief... there are no words. Escaping into the wonderful world of one's imagination is a great place to begin/ allow the healing process to happen.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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The death of any child is heartbreaking but when it is one of your own, son, daughter, grandson, granddaughter the grief... there are no words. Escaping into the wonderful world of one's imagination is a great place to begin/ allow the healing process to happen.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your caring words, Hitcher.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sun Catcher
by amada
Dear Amada, I feel your pain. I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine the loss of my grandson. I have taken care of him since he was born. I don't think I could survive his death.
Your writing is so poetic and lyrical.... extraordinary.
Wonderful imagery and metaphor.
"the sun shines like enamel and the wind unravels my ivory hair"
"His smile always made me think of a radiant moon"
"this hunger for insight that plays hide and seek in my soul. "
"the sight of those red and yellow leaves, how they tumble in the wind. I"
"after all this wishing, travelling, and dreaming, maybe I will be able to accept the weight of my losses, and be grateful for everything else I still have" l love it. Hopefully Writing about it will help some.
Big gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Sun Catcher
by amada
Dear Amada, I feel your pain. I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine the loss of my grandson. I have taken care of him since he was born. I don't think I could survive his death.
Your writing is so poetic and lyrical.... extraordinary.
Wonderful imagery and metaphor.
"the sun shines like enamel and the wind unravels my ivory hair"
"His smile always made me think of a radiant moon"
"this hunger for insight that plays hide and seek in my soul. "
"the sight of those red and yellow leaves, how they tumble in the wind. I"
"after all this wishing, travelling, and dreaming, maybe I will be able to accept the weight of my losses, and be grateful for everything else I still have" l love it. Hopefully Writing about it will help some.
Big gypsy hugs
Comment Written 01-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Ohhh, hi dear Gypdy.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely write that is full of zest and life. I really enjoyed walking along with you on the journey you were on. Your verse seemed as if I were hearing your thoughts and perceptions. Very well written.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a lovely write that is full of zest and life. I really enjoyed walking along with you on the journey you were on. Your verse seemed as if I were hearing your thoughts and perceptions. Very well written.
Melissa
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Melissa.
Comment from Michele Harber
I'm so sorry for all you've been through, but so amazed and impressed that you're not letting that hold you down. You're acknowledging the beauty and wonder that still exists around you, and allowing that things will improve and that, at some point, you will be able to bear the weight of your losses. I hope you reach that state of acceptance sooner rather than later but, meanwhile, I find your remarkable attitude absolutely inspirational. Thank you for having the courage to share both your story and your inspiration.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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I'm so sorry for all you've been through, but so amazed and impressed that you're not letting that hold you down. You're acknowledging the beauty and wonder that still exists around you, and allowing that things will improve and that, at some point, you will be able to bear the weight of your losses. I hope you reach that state of acceptance sooner rather than later but, meanwhile, I find your remarkable attitude absolutely inspirational. Thank you for having the courage to share both your story and your inspiration.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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thank you so much, dear poet.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from T B Botts
You've written of your loss and your unshakable faith in getting back what you've lost. I applaud your optimism and faith. Thanks for sharing this work. God bless and keep you.
Tom
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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You've written of your loss and your unshakable faith in getting back what you've lost. I applaud your optimism and faith. Thanks for sharing this work. God bless and keep you.
Tom
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank yyou, Tom.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a powerful story that had quite an effect on me. You describe issues and problems that many can relate to.
These stood out:
And the pain, like a worn-out old wagon wheel going through a nasty patch of sand, jolts and scrapes at my core. And I wish, oh how I wish, that these tragedies were not, that my life could be as subtle as a verse. Still, I comfort myself; the sun shines brighter in that patch of winter snow.
Terrific descriptive imagery and visuals. Very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This was a powerful story that had quite an effect on me. You describe issues and problems that many can relate to.
These stood out:
And the pain, like a worn-out old wagon wheel going through a nasty patch of sand, jolts and scrapes at my core. And I wish, oh how I wish, that these tragedies were not, that my life could be as subtle as a verse. Still, I comfort myself; the sun shines brighter in that patch of winter snow.
Terrific descriptive imagery and visuals. Very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you, dear Muse.
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice piece of writing, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a lovely feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the descriptions you included in it. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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This is a very nice piece of writing, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a lovely feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the descriptions you included in it. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading this work.
