Your Own Cliche
Quatrains - Unmetered44 total reviews
Comment from Pili Pubul
You truly share "what makes you tick and dare". Magnificently..
Love the journey trough the design of your thoughts, uniquely you.
This poem say so much , your whole being is in it. Love you. Pili
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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You truly share "what makes you tick and dare". Magnificently..
Love the journey trough the design of your thoughts, uniquely you.
This poem say so much , your whole being is in it. Love you. Pili
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Oh so thank you Pili for a wonderful review.
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You are so welcome Gungalita ...
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Smile Pili.
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Hi baby , not feeling to well , perhaps new medication, so won't stay long . Love you
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Oh poor girl. Love you.
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A bit better today... Love you. Pili
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Sigh. Love you too.
Comment from JW
Hmm. I am going to have to think about this.
Are you sure this is about poetry? It sure seems like it's referring to something else - to me.
Thanks for sharing this. Except now, after reading this what could be interpreted as a romantic poem - I am going to have to work hard in order to refocus on what needs to get done. JW :-)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Hmm. I am going to have to think about this.
Are you sure this is about poetry? It sure seems like it's referring to something else - to me.
Thanks for sharing this. Except now, after reading this what could be interpreted as a romantic poem - I am going to have to work hard in order to refocus on what needs to get done. JW :-)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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LOL JW, it is what you feel it to be. Thanks for a wonderful review.
Comment from RGstar
This is a well constructed write. Great usage of character lines. Good thoughts transferred to words and a good portrayal of their meaning.
Well done,
RG
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This is a well constructed write. Great usage of character lines. Good thoughts transferred to words and a good portrayal of their meaning.
Well done,
RG
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks RG for a wonderful review of this.
Comment from Kingsland
The depth of a person is a wonder to see, but we can only dive so deep and then the pressure with make us come back to the surface. I liked this poem and its thoughts. They are written very poetically and have a good poetic vibration in them. This was an excellent piece of poetry to have read and written this response for... John
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The depth of a person is a wonder to see, but we can only dive so deep and then the pressure with make us come back to the surface. I liked this poem and its thoughts. They are written very poetically and have a good poetic vibration in them. This was an excellent piece of poetry to have read and written this response for... John
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much John for a wonderful review.
