Savannah Love
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Comment from Janie King
Okay, it appears the older gentleman at least knows enough about Cask and Billy Joe to talk with them. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
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Okay, it appears the older gentleman at least knows enough about Cask and Billy Joe to talk with them. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara, but now you've got me hungry for peach pie - with or without the ice cream and coffee! Glad to see the boys have found someone who might talk.
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Good chapter, Barbara, but now you've got me hungry for peach pie - with or without the ice cream and coffee! Glad to see the boys have found someone who might talk.
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by. When my husband was stationed in GA, I loved eating their peach pie.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
I lived off one of those roads, Barbara, and there was not one speck of gravel on them. In Georgia, gravel constitutes a "paved road" - and most aren't, even now. :D This is an excellent transition. Peach pie, ice cream and coffee...the boys should have come out here ages ago. :) nancy
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I lived off one of those roads, Barbara, and there was not one speck of gravel on them. In Georgia, gravel constitutes a "paved road" - and most aren't, even now. :D This is an excellent transition. Peach pie, ice cream and coffee...the boys should have come out here ages ago. :) nancy
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I agree. GA has the best peach pie. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Taffspride
Although I have not been reviewing much lately Barbara, I have been following your story. It has caught my imagination and I look for it every week.
As always you keep your readers enthralled, and I enjoy your great use of dialog to tell the story.
Just one little typo:
I like dogs, but Dog seems to prefer by buddy." I believe you meant "my buddy."
Thank you for sharing,
Iechyd da
Ann
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Although I have not been reviewing much lately Barbara, I have been following your story. It has caught my imagination and I look for it every week.
As always you keep your readers enthralled, and I enjoy your great use of dialog to tell the story.
Just one little typo:
I like dogs, but Dog seems to prefer by buddy." I believe you meant "my buddy."
Thank you for sharing,
Iechyd da
Ann
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Thank you for the catch. I read this over and over again and still messed up. I appreciate the review.
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No problem Barbara. It was a great chapter. gets more interesting by the week.
Comment from Dawn Munro
You've captured the mood very well in this chapter, I think, Barbara. I really enjoyed the part with the hound, and how the old dog was so friendly. :)
Paige didn't surprise me either. She's one feisty gal. I enjoyed it very much.
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You've captured the mood very well in this chapter, I think, Barbara. I really enjoyed the part with the hound, and how the old dog was so friendly. :)
Paige didn't surprise me either. She's one feisty gal. I enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you for dropping by and the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Good seeing you back 9on track again. A great chapter to an even greater story. So glad to see you. Good work I hope we can go on on for a few more rounds.
Great read and no spags. Thanks again.
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Good seeing you back 9on track again. A great chapter to an even greater story. So glad to see you. Good work I hope we can go on on for a few more rounds.
Great read and no spags. Thanks again.
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I am sure we can go a few more go rounds. IF I ever get this book finished, I have ideas written down for my next one. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from elgone
Looking for answers, in a sort of no man's land for rednecks. Bribery by pie a la mode, that's cute and probably accurate for the old feller.
"I like dogs, but Dog seems to prefer by buddy." - my
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Looking for answers, in a sort of no man's land for rednecks. Bribery by pie a la mode, that's cute and probably accurate for the old feller.
"I like dogs, but Dog seems to prefer by buddy." - my
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I have fixed my typo. I don't know why I keep making those stupid errors. I read it over and over again. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from c_lucas
Most of those roads were dirt without any gravel. Young white boys loved to raid those shanty towns just to stir up the blacks. While I lived in Georgia, three of the whites were hung naked in trees. The Blacks kill a few, but mostly they defended themselves with out killing their antagonists. Very well written.
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Most of those roads were dirt without any gravel. Young white boys loved to raid those shanty towns just to stir up the blacks. While I lived in Georgia, three of the whites were hung naked in trees. The Blacks kill a few, but mostly they defended themselves with out killing their antagonists. Very well written.
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Thank you for the kind review and your story. It helps.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
They're from old slave families, and plenty - add comma
adding to Walkers' warrant - Walker's
Dog seems to prefer by buddy - my buddy
I like the vernacular speech in your dialogue - not everyone speaks like an Ivy League English professor :-)
Brooke
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They're from old slave families, and plenty - add comma
adding to Walkers' warrant - Walker's
Dog seems to prefer by buddy - my buddy
I like the vernacular speech in your dialogue - not everyone speaks like an Ivy League English professor :-)
Brooke
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Thank you for your eagle eyes. I always appreciate your input.
Comment from Darkhorse555
The sun still peeked over the horizon loved the setting set in those words beautifully penned and a delightful piece of reading excellent piece
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The sun still peeked over the horizon loved the setting set in those words beautifully penned and a delightful piece of reading excellent piece
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Thank you for the kind review.
