Savannah Love
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Comment from barkingdog
From reading Alice's diary Paige develops a mistrust of the 'southern gentlemen' facade and looses her faith in Cash and even Billy Joe, thinking all men are only after her money.
Mary Pat defends the men's intentions.
Now, you have me wondering who's right.
Have a great time with your family. You are very fortunate to have them.
:)ellen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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From reading Alice's diary Paige develops a mistrust of the 'southern gentlemen' facade and looses her faith in Cash and even Billy Joe, thinking all men are only after her money.
Mary Pat defends the men's intentions.
Now, you have me wondering who's right.
Have a great time with your family. You are very fortunate to have them.
:)ellen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I am wondering myself. LOL Thank you for the kind review and the well wishes.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara,
Nice little bit of witty humor in this post to break in the money bags of Paige the heiress.
I thought it was well penned and no issues my end.
Your characters are all so familiar now that I feel part of the story itself. Great job overall my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Nice little bit of witty humor in this post to break in the money bags of Paige the heiress.
I thought it was well penned and no issues my end.
Your characters are all so familiar now that I feel part of the story itself. Great job overall my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Good, when I get stumped on where to go with it, I'll contact you. LOL Thank you for the wonderful review and your support.
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LOL :)
Have a great week my friend.
Hugs
Maureen
Comment from Taffspride
Great chapter Barbara. For now it looks like Cleve got his just rewards, but I wonder how long he will stay away.
One little spelling error broach. This should be brooch, as in a decorative pin.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Great chapter Barbara. For now it looks like Cleve got his just rewards, but I wonder how long he will stay away.
One little spelling error broach. This should be brooch, as in a decorative pin.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Darn!! You are correct, it must have been a typo. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
This is interesting. You have shown Paige's depression very well. Hopefully, she won't lose all her good friends by making her uncalled for remarks.
I only notice a few place where an 'a' or 'the' was left out.
They are below:
"The Southern gentleman is not(a) myth.
"If you need anything, I'll be in(the) parlor."
April
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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This is interesting. You have shown Paige's depression very well. Hopefully, she won't lose all her good friends by making her uncalled for remarks.
I only notice a few place where an 'a' or 'the' was left out.
They are below:
"The Southern gentleman is not(a) myth.
"If you need anything, I'll be in(the) parlor."
April
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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When I edit, I read over those little words just like they are there. I hate it when I do that. Thank you for the catch.
I do the same thing. A lot of us do that. It's not unusual. You're welcome.
Comment from Gungalo
So much for Cleve and now the investigation via the diary continues. Paige is consumes with it. Mary Pat makes her slow down a bit when she brings tea into the room.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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So much for Cleve and now the investigation via the diary continues. Paige is consumes with it. Mary Pat makes her slow down a bit when she brings tea into the room.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate your support.
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Smile Barb.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good Barb,
I can give you six stars which you deserve Barb.
To me it looks like ghost are no longer the suspected trouble makers.
In your novel you have an excellent way to keep the mystery going of who are they or just a person scheming something not Good
Have a nice time when you are away.
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Good Barb,
I can give you six stars which you deserve Barb.
To me it looks like ghost are no longer the suspected trouble makers.
In your novel you have an excellent way to keep the mystery going of who are they or just a person scheming something not Good
Have a nice time when you are away.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the kind words and the review.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I know Paige is going through a lot, and the ex harassing her for money hidden behind an proposal was low. But as much as Cash has been there for her, Paige is so wrong to lump him with her other bad choices. Cash rules!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I know Paige is going through a lot, and the ex harassing her for money hidden behind an proposal was low. But as much as Cash has been there for her, Paige is so wrong to lump him with her other bad choices. Cash rules!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I agree, but Paige has a lot of extra baggage and it's starting to come out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Kidlike101
I found the piece a bit confusing (at first, once I reached the middle of it I finally got it) as I haven't read the previous chapters. It would have been nice to have a some character background in the author's notes.
That would be my one comment, it's written well and everyone is in character. not sure why she can't see Cash is looking out for her but perhaps she will eventually.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I found the piece a bit confusing (at first, once I reached the middle of it I finally got it) as I haven't read the previous chapters. It would have been nice to have a some character background in the author's notes.
That would be my one comment, it's written well and everyone is in character. not sure why she can't see Cash is looking out for her but perhaps she will eventually.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I don't like to put background in the author's notes because in a regular novel they would there. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Morgan is becoming quite the guard dog. This is very well written with a new twist in the story. Good job.
Errors:
"I think the parlor. I have research (to)do in the library."
rough for the Southerners after the Civil War. It was a rough go." Mary Pat glared at Paige. "Rough" used twice close together. How about, "It was no Sunday picnic, but the South survived."
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Morgan is becoming quite the guard dog. This is very well written with a new twist in the story. Good job.
Errors:
"I think the parlor. I have research (to)do in the library."
rough for the Southerners after the Civil War. It was a rough go." Mary Pat glared at Paige. "Rough" used twice close together. How about, "It was no Sunday picnic, but the South survived."
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I made the changes. I appreciate your review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie.
Comment from Sasha
Poor Paige is now suspicious of Cash who was just joking. Have a great trip and spoil the grandkids rotten. That's what grandmothers are for. Have fun.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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Poor Paige is now suspicious of Cash who was just joking. Have a great trip and spoil the grandkids rotten. That's what grandmothers are for. Have fun.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2013
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I know grandparents do have a purpose. Thank you for the kind review.
