An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "I believe"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
25 total reviews
Comment from akulkumol
Nicely described personification of self. Finding happiness this way in life gives me a satisfactory feeling. Loved the poet's vision life.Loved reading and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Nicely described personification of self. Finding happiness this way in life gives me a satisfactory feeling. Loved the poet's vision life.Loved reading and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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And I loved that you loved ' I believe.' Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
This is beautiful, and you're right, needs no picture! I like the way all the endings end with the same sound, great tribute to your faith! Blessings to you!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This is beautiful, and you're right, needs no picture! I like the way all the endings end with the same sound, great tribute to your faith! Blessings to you!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
in awe of God's creation - add apostrophe for possessive
solid rhyming
life's a wondrous celebration - I love the celebratory and appreciative tone of this poem of faith, perfect for Easter week :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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in awe of God's creation - add apostrophe for possessive
solid rhyming
life's a wondrous celebration - I love the celebratory and appreciative tone of this poem of faith, perfect for Easter week :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I fixed it, I am delighted you enjoyed the poem and got the full meaning of each short verse. Happy Easter Brooke, I hope Sawyer finds a 'million eggs'. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn, I see where you said, in your author's notes, you only have 16 more to go or should you say you the have had 14 accomplished. I've been following your poetry and you've done them most excellently. This poem is the release of your feelings of what you believe strongly into the resurrection of your life into a glorified eternity in heaven. And what a wonderful belief it is. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Carolyn, I see where you said, in your author's notes, you only have 16 more to go or should you say you the have had 14 accomplished. I've been following your poetry and you've done them most excellently. This poem is the release of your feelings of what you believe strongly into the resurrection of your life into a glorified eternity in heaven. And what a wonderful belief it is. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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And blessings right back to you Alex, I am impressed that you read and review all of this months work. I appreciate your wonderful support and encouragement. :-) Carolyn
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You are so sincerely welcome Carolyn
Comment from royowen
A wonderful " and thou shalt be saved" statement if I ever saw one, I love this short succinct poem which really says so much! Like the works of the reaches out to touch us! Well done, Carolyn, blessings, Roy.
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A wonderful " and thou shalt be saved" statement if I ever saw one, I love this short succinct poem which really says so much! Like the works of the reaches out to touch us! Well done, Carolyn, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Blessings back to you Roy, I always look forward to your understanding and words of encouragement. I am sorry I am so behind in my comments. I am glad you enjoyed 'I believe.'
:-) Carolyn
