An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Rain-drenched Rainbows"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
24 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Ah, spring is in the air. Love rainbows. Everytime I see one, just have to look. One of nature's wonders. Good luck with the contest. Les
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Ah, spring is in the air. Love rainbows. Everytime I see one, just have to look. One of nature's wonders. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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When I see a rainbow, I stare. It is one of the most mesmerizing events God has blessed us with. Thank you Les, :-)
Carolyn
Comment from DonandVicki
A lovely Nanni that is very well composed and a good solid entry into the contest. I like the art work that you chose to enhance your poem. Don
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
A lovely Nanni that is very well composed and a good solid entry into the contest. I like the art work that you chose to enhance your poem. Don
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much, I appreciate your kind comments and best wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from JB Lynn
Another lovely display you've got here. I really like the image of "Rain-drenched rainbows" because so often I read about rainbows after the rain is gone. This makes me think of a rainbow you might see in a watercolor painting.
I think you might need an apostrophe after "Horizons". Otherwise, this is perfect. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - and with your incredible personal challenge!
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Another lovely display you've got here. I really like the image of "Rain-drenched rainbows" because so often I read about rainbows after the rain is gone. This makes me think of a rainbow you might see in a watercolor painting.
I think you might need an apostrophe after "Horizons". Otherwise, this is perfect. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest - and with your incredible personal challenge!
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Maybe the sweet unicorn family will find their Rainbow soon and be blessed with a forest home of their own. I am delighted you like this series. Your comments and opinions mean a lot to me.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this Naani Poetry contest entry fulfills all of the elements of the contest by using stunning descriptive words to revive our hearts at the thought of the gift of rain. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
Carolyn, this Naani Poetry contest entry fulfills all of the elements of the contest by using stunning descriptive words to revive our hearts at the thought of the gift of rain. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you GracieAnn for this wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn