Comment from Heidixoxo

Excellent

What a captivating story you've written my friend. You had my attention all the way throughout. I think your characters are wonderful as well. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Good luck to you....Heidixoxo

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Many thanks! I hope to read your writings, also!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was well written. You really do an excellent job of showing us a mystery and it was enjoyable watching it unfold before our eyes. I thought the detective was terrific. Despite being shot, he maintains his determination to solve the case. I love his dedication to his job. haha This was very interesting and an enjoyable read.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

I thank you for your very kind review!