Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Chapter 10, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from Lucy26
Very well written. I enjoyed the interaction with the characters. Like how Paige is trying not to date yet the doctor is asking her out. Know the feeling of having been hurt and not wanting to open your heart to pain.
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Very well written. I enjoyed the interaction with the characters. Like how Paige is trying not to date yet the doctor is asking her out. Know the feeling of having been hurt and not wanting to open your heart to pain.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I am enjoying reading this story. I love the way you develop the characters. As usual I saw no need for editing and you have left me waiting for more.
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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I am enjoying reading this story. I love the way you develop the characters. As usual I saw no need for editing and you have left me waiting for more.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 08-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
So, Cash has a rival for Paige's affections, it seems. Mysteries still abound, and leave the reader wondering.
Good post, Barbara. Didn't spot any nits. I have a suggestion, though.
"It had lasted nineteen months." - Don't think you need 'had'. If you say it out loud, I think "It lasted nineteen months." sounds more natural as dialogue.
Just my opinion, of course.
Hugs,
Av
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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So, Cash has a rival for Paige's affections, it seems. Mysteries still abound, and leave the reader wondering.
Good post, Barbara. Didn't spot any nits. I have a suggestion, though.
"It had lasted nineteen months." - Don't think you need 'had'. If you say it out loud, I think "It lasted nineteen months." sounds more natural as dialogue.
Just my opinion, of course.
Hugs,
Av
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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I would have said it without the had, I was afraid I would get hits on it. I will change it. Thank you for the courage.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
A well penned post and continuation Barbara. Though I thought Cash may have reacted more forcefully over Marc.:)
Great job though - no issues just a smooth and easy read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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A well penned post and continuation Barbara. Though I thought Cash may have reacted more forcefully over Marc.:)
Great job though - no issues just a smooth and easy read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Cash isn't ready to admit his feelings for Paige, but it is coming soon.
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from barkingdog
This is a very well written transitional post. They are necessary, but never very exciting.:) I'm wondering now how the doctor will fit into Paige's life. A little fore shadowing? Well, done, barbara.
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This is a very well written transitional post. They are necessary, but never very exciting.:) I'm wondering now how the doctor will fit into Paige's life. A little fore shadowing? Well, done, barbara.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from unimatrix001
So we finally find out why Paige has been so distant with Cash. Nice heart ache/healing story.
He wasn't here[,] and he isn't my boyfriend - compound sentence
Besides[,] I told you when you came to the ER. - not absolutely needed, but helps for clarity.
Thunder had scared him[,] and he took off - compound sentence
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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So we finally find out why Paige has been so distant with Cash. Nice heart ache/healing story.
He wasn't here[,] and he isn't my boyfriend - compound sentence
Besides[,] I told you when you came to the ER. - not absolutely needed, but helps for clarity.
Thunder had scared him[,] and he took off - compound sentence
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I appreciate it.
Comment from Hareem.S
This is an interesting story you have penned down. I missed a few chapters, but it is still a pleasure to read your story. Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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This is an interesting story you have penned down. I missed a few chapters, but it is still a pleasure to read your story. Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CR Delport
They take everything so casually. I would be screaming my head off and run for the hills. Another great chapter that is very well written. I found no obvious errors.
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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They take everything so casually. I would be screaming my head off and run for the hills. Another great chapter that is very well written. I found no obvious errors.
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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It gets worse and the women have some issues with it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from muezza56
having read some of the previous posts relating to this story. i find it interesting and enjoyable and the standard of writing is really good, as is the interaction between the characters and the supernatural element adds an extra dimension
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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having read some of the previous posts relating to this story. i find it interesting and enjoyable and the standard of writing is really good, as is the interaction between the characters and the supernatural element adds an extra dimension
Comment Written 07-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from bookishfabler
She glanced at her ringing phone, then back at Cash(-,) and smiled. "It's my mom."
That out of the way, another good chapter. I know I've been in and out and I apologize for that. I wish I could be more consisitant. Anyway, I am still following and you still write nearly nit free. Great job
hugs
Heidi
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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She glanced at her ringing phone, then back at Cash(-,) and smiled. "It's my mom."
That out of the way, another good chapter. I know I've been in and out and I apologize for that. I wish I could be more consisitant. Anyway, I am still following and you still write nearly nit free. Great job
hugs
Heidi
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 07-May-2013
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It's always a pleasure to hear from you.
