Song Of The Serenades
eerie melodies of the mountain33 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Beautiful image and stunning description of the wind rushing through the serenade mountains. Above all a romance! A beautiful reading experience that conjured up a tender love story
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Beautiful image and stunning description of the wind rushing through the serenade mountains. Above all a romance! A beautiful reading experience that conjured up a tender love story
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your great kindness!
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is a lovely piece of writing. I don't know the area so the photograph helped. I thought it was going to be a love story to the area, but then you introduced a gal so it seemed to be to both intrinsically linked. I did wonder why the final stanza is separated from the rest of the work by being less bold. A poem should build to a strong end and by having the end less bold suggested the opposite to me.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely piece of writing. I don't know the area so the photograph helped. I thought it was going to be a love story to the area, but then you introduced a gal so it seemed to be to both intrinsically linked. I did wonder why the final stanza is separated from the rest of the work by being less bold. A poem should build to a strong end and by having the end less bold suggested the opposite to me.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I have trouble with the editor sometime. So much thanks for your review and kind words!
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Ah, yes I thought it might be that. Yesterday I tried to turn a single word gold and it came out black. I had to keep changing it from being bold and italic, it was that which was blocking my colour choice. Did you get it sorted?
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Sometimes I just plain give up and go to regular font and background color because nothing I do seems to work.
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lol even that can bug out with a silver background and one word backed in white.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This free verse nature poem has some great action verbs. My favorite line, though, was: and prayed their secret psalm
to the Serenade Mountains
I had to go look up 'whisp' which appears to be a variable spelling of 'wisp.' Interesting read, pretty photo.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This free verse nature poem has some great action verbs. My favorite line, though, was: and prayed their secret psalm
to the Serenade Mountains
I had to go look up 'whisp' which appears to be a variable spelling of 'wisp.' Interesting read, pretty photo.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful poem of love with the haunting refrain of the "Serenade Mountains." You invoke the sounds and sensations and even the tastes that surround these memories.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Beautiful poem of love with the haunting refrain of the "Serenade Mountains." You invoke the sounds and sensations and even the tastes that surround these memories.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Your words very much humble me.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well Serenade Mountains sounds as though it is a spot of fond memories and an early love. There is a softness to the word usage and the image is good. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Well Serenade Mountains sounds as though it is a spot of fond memories and an early love. There is a softness to the word usage and the image is good. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from Dimzdale1
At first read I thought you had given nature human qualities but then realized you had compared the girl you courted to the natural features of the mountains. Either way quite beautiful. Thank you for your artistry.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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At first read I thought you had given nature human qualities but then realized you had compared the girl you courted to the natural features of the mountains. Either way quite beautiful. Thank you for your artistry.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Your words are very humbling! Thank you!
Comment from nancyjam
Oh this is just beautiful! Wonderful well chosen words and descriptive lines give the reader a sense of the natural beauty and sets the mood as the poet reminisces about a lost love.
I enjoyed your poem so much Thanks for sharing. The artwork is perfect!
Nancy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Oh this is just beautiful! Wonderful well chosen words and descriptive lines give the reader a sense of the natural beauty and sets the mood as the poet reminisces about a lost love.
I enjoyed your poem so much Thanks for sharing. The artwork is perfect!
Nancy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I appreciate very much your kind words!
Comment from Esther Brown
Jim that is beautiful! Wow. A man who writes romantic poems. One of my most precious memories is my dad tucked into the hospital bed with mom singing her Hawaiian love songs. I need to write that story. I wrote home before dark about mom but that special reconciliation before she died was left out.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Jim that is beautiful! Wow. A man who writes romantic poems. One of my most precious memories is my dad tucked into the hospital bed with mom singing her Hawaiian love songs. I need to write that story. I wrote home before dark about mom but that special reconciliation before she died was left out.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I always appreciate your kind wors!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was very descriptive and well written. I like some of the words you used like:crimson lips. The picture us beautiful. Very good job on this.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It was very descriptive and well written. I like some of the words you used like:crimson lips. The picture us beautiful. Very good job on this.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind comments!
Comment from royowen
A great post about the natural things that God has to offer in the US. what a lovely way of describking the countryside Jim, God gave you a beautiful land to be nurtured and cherished. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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A great post about the natural things that God has to offer in the US. what a lovely way of describking the countryside Jim, God gave you a beautiful land to be nurtured and cherished. Beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Sorry for the delay. I am grateful for your words!
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