Humor Poetry posted August 4, 2016 Chapters:  ...247 248 -249- 250... 


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In 8-6 Mixed Meter

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Debonair Darren the Heron

by Treischel


Debonair Darren the Heron,
with trendy touch of guile
and his Mohawk hair a flarin',
has vaudevillian style
that is so completely darin',
it's bound to break a smile
on any bloke who's been starin'
at antics aired awhile.

As he gets his toes a tappin',
his motions entertain.
With his wayward wings a flappin',
his dance moves are insane.
He might even break out rappin'
an avian refrain,
when the Heron calls are crackin'
and rockin' round the lane.

He looks so very debonair,
dressed in fluffy feathers,
the ladies love his racy hair
at their get-togethers.
He snares them where his fashion flair
and sassy endeavors
will sway them with his stylish airs,
promisin' whenevers.

Debonair Darren the Heron,
with trendy touch of guile
and his Mohawk hair a flarin',
has vaudevillian style.

Debonair Darren the Heron,
you're such a sight to see
a bonafide bird performin'-
a Bieber wannabe.





I just couldn't resist using this colorful character's picture again. Such personality!

Aired - displayed, set out, shown.
Avian - bird
Bieber - Justin Bieber is the current badboy, teenage heartthrob. A singer and dancer.
Bloke - English slang for a male person.
Bonafide - legitimate, real, certifiable
Debonair - dashing, with it, in fashion
Guile - cunning
Mohawk - a haircut mimicking a Native American style, where the hair stands up in the middle of the head, but the sides are shaved.
Rappin' - rapping, a musical form of speaking a song in rapid verbal flow.
Vaudevillian - deriving from Vaudeville. An old-time stage show featuring song and dance, punctuated with off-color jokes.
Wannabe - imatator

This poem is written to an 8-6 mixed meter in Octaves (8 line stanzas) and Quatrains (4 line stanzas) with an abab rhyme scheme.

This photograph was taken by the author himself on July 30, 2016.
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