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I need some advice.
A chapter in the book Savannah Love
Help!!!!!!
by barbara.wilkey
| Background Paige was raised in Boston and inherited an antebellum house. Cash was hired to restore the house to authenticity. South vs North as these two attempt to find love. |
I got my first rejection letter for Savannah Love. It has caused me to take a second look at an area that I have questioned since I wrote the beginning of the novel. (I hate doing it, but...)
The first chapter of Savannah Love is about Bradley Bookman, the Battle of Chickamauga, and how he becomes a ghost. Then I move to the second chapter and begin with Paige and Cash. When I wrote the novel I felt I needed to lay the foundation of Bradley becoming a ghost.
Now, I am wondering if I just need to incorporate Bradley's story during the novel.
Thank you for assisting me with this issue.
I appreciate all the feed back.
The first chapter of Savannah Love is about Bradley Bookman, the Battle of Chickamauga, and how he becomes a ghost. Then I move to the second chapter and begin with Paige and Cash. When I wrote the novel I felt I needed to lay the foundation of Bradley becoming a ghost.
Now, I am wondering if I just need to incorporate Bradley's story during the novel.
Thank you for assisting me with this issue.
I appreciate all the feed back.
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