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8-6 Quatrains

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

This Flower Vine

by Treischel



This tiny flower, so divine,
that clings to yonder fence,
is called Black-eyed Susan Vine.
Its yellow is intense.

Its petals open to the sun,
like little begging hands,
can be perceived by anyone
throughout the southern lands.

Such lovely little yellow plants,
with heart-like spreading leaves,
give blessings that each sighting grants,
if only one believes.

For flower colors paint the world
with beauty to admire.
Allowing hope to be unfurled
for peace that we desire.







This flower is named a Black-eyed Susan Vine. The technical name is Thunbergia alata, which is a climbing plant native to eastern Africa, South America, Australia, Hawaii, Texas, and Florida. So it is a temperate plant. It is a perenial that is used as an ornamental in gardens and often in hanging baskets. It has large heart shaped leaves. I tried to capture its characteristics here in this poem.

This poem consists of simple abab rhymed quatrains in an 8-6 meter.

This phtograph was taken by the author along a walking path in Chanhassen, Minnesota.
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