Humor Poetry posted December 9, 2014 Chapters:  ...191 194 -195- 196... 


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A Trinet

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Scare Crow

by Treischel



A crow
A Scarecrow
That greets us with warm "Welcome"
It seems promising things to come
A "caw"
Ha hah!
In straw

It Invites
And delights
It sits nearby the front door
While Invoking Edgar Allen Poe's "Nevermore!"
Its chore
Sit before
The door

A scene
So keen
Like nothing I have ever seen
And the best of all things
It clings
Then springs
Its wings


"So okay"
I say
"This bird's meant for a tree"
"Never a scarecrow should it be"
To fool
To rule
So cool





Recognized


A Crow is not supposed to be a scarecrow! Is it?
I mean, wouldn't it attract other crows, not scare them?

This fellow was on exhibit near the front door of the Minnesaota Arboretum. I thought he was pretty cool.

This poem is a Trinet.
A Trinet is a type of poem that keys off of word count rather than syllable count. It is written with the following format: first two lines have two words, the next two lines have six words, the final three lines have two words each. So, the Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:
Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 wordsRepeat this pattern 2 more times (Thus the Tri or three requirement), if centered correctly it provides visual impact.
There is no requirement to rhyme or for meter, but I thought this layout begs for a rhyme scheme. Thre is no limit to the number of stanzas, but 3 is most common.

For this poem, I chose 4 stanzas, with a varying rhyme scheme because I was intrigued with the number of things you could do with it. So, here are the schemes I used:
Stanza 1: aabbccc
Stanza 2: aabbbbb
Stanza 3: aaabbbb
Stanza 4: aabbccc

This photograph was taken by the author in October, 2014.
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