Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 30, 2014 Chapters:  ...28 29 -30- 31... 


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A chapter in the book My Life In A Box

Turnaround

by LovnPeace

When all the fruits are given
all gifts opened
cherished love consumed
and nary a crack appears
walls stay strong
slowly
erosion creeps
bricks bake
in the light of reality
my wall builds
oh my love
you woke so late
I hear you break
as I walk away





Thank you Shiloh 106 for your art.Walls are hard to break down in both sexes. Sometimes, many times we open up too late to love.
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