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Mixed Rhyme Scheme

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

The Blossom

by Treischel


There's fire inside the blossom
And petals dipped in pink.
They're reaching for the sunlight
On vines that interlink

The bloom is beautiful and bright
A truly effervescent sight
To grace the path along the way
And brighten up most any day.

And OH the JOY to see it!
To be drawn into its lure,
Is a feeling fresh and pure.
Think I'll linger just a bit.


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I dont know what kind of flower this is, but it sure is unique and beautiful.

I mixed the rhyme scheme in this poem. It is:
abcb ccdd effe.

The meter was:
7-6-7-6 8-8-8-8 7-7-7-7

I came across this flower along the path at the Minnesota Arboretum in Chanhassen, Minnesota. I shot this photograph with my Sony Alpha camera.
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