General Poetry posted October 19, 2014 Chapters:  ...177 178 -179- 180... 


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A Pantoum

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Colorful Corridor

by Treischel



My path is strewn with leaves of gold.
They beckon me to follow them
on living corridor so bold.
A hedge provides a double hem.

They beckon me to follow them
to a glowing forest hollow.
A hedge provides a double hem.
A promising path to follow.

To a glowing forest hollow
I was drawn to like I'm dreaming.
A promising path to follow
had my focal senses beaming.

I was drawn to like I'm dreaming,
to such beautiful colored trees.
Had my focal senses beaming
as they ripple in the breeze.

To such beautiful colored trees,
a living corridor so bold,
as they ripple in the breeze,
my path is strewn with leaves of gold.







The fall colors have been outstanding this year. Here is just one example.

This poem is a Pantoum.
A Pantoum is a poem that is made up of quatrains. In a Pantoum the second and fourth lines of the previous stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next stanza. In the last stanza, the first and third lines of the first stanza become the second and fourth lines, only in reverse order. That establishes a rhyme scheme as follows for a 4 stanza Pantoum:
A1,B1,A2,B2 B1,C1,B2,C2 C1,D1,C2,D2 D1,A1,D2,A2.

When writing this format, then, you need to be cognizant of the impact of two lines as you go. This lovely waterfall effect creates new meanings to the words, as it flows. You could have an E1 and E2 also and keep going indefinitely, if you want.

This picture was taken by the author on October 17, 2014 at the Minnesota Arboretum located in Chanhassen, Mn.
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