General Poetry posted October 15, 2014 Chapters:  ...171 172 -173- 174... 


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Five-Four Quatrains

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Blue Butterfly

by Treischel



Butterfly so blue
I'm looking at you
Your delicate wings
Are beautiful things

I'm always amazed
Bedazzled and dazed
At colorful sight
Of your dainty flight

When wide wings spread
The horizon ahead
Goes endlessly on
They flap and it's gone






Butterflies sit for a bit. If you're lucky you can put them on your finger. But eventually they fly away. Some have amazingly long migrations.

This poem uses a consistant 5 syllable count per line within 4 line quatrains.
The rhyme scheme is aabb.

This picture was taken by the author in late September, 2014.
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