General Poetry posted June 10, 2014 Chapters:  ...164 165 -169- 170... 


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Sestets

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Perched

by Treischel

So pensive on a tangled perch,
A great bird does a furtive search
Along the flowing river banks,
A twisted shoreline at its flanks,
Majestically on thin planks
Of wood.

Alert to opportunities
Available among the trees,
Or in the water's murky swell,
A Great Blue Herron sits a spell
Before its restless quirks compel
Its flight.

Then, with a mighty spread of wings,
From warped wood roost it quickly springs,
dips and soars above the river,
On wide wings it flaps and quivers.
Through me, the sight sent small shivers
Of joy.





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What a regal site it is to spot a Great Blue Herron perched on a snag of driftwood along the Mississippi. In flight, these birds look like true descendants of the dinosaurs.

This poem used Sestets (six lines) unlike the Quatrain (4 lines)with a meter of 8/8/8/8/8/2 and a rhyme scheme of aabbb-, where the - can be any word and doesnt need to rhyme.

This picture was taken by the Author's grandson, Jeremy.
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