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7-6-7-6 Quatrains

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

White Bird Hunting

by Treischel

Water lilies load this lake
with thick cabbage patch green.
A spot where Egrets partake
of frogs and fish protein.

Our feathered friend stalks its prey
on stilted steps all day,
spearing supper with sharp beak
when tiny targets stray.

To spot this white bird working
just walk along the shore.
If you should see it lurking
'Tis scene you can't ignore.






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A Great White Egret stalks the shallows in search of food at Battle Creek Park in Maplewood, Minnesota.

This poem was writtem with a 7-6-7-6 meter and abab rhyme scheme.

This picture was taken by the author himself.
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