General Poetry posted June 6, 2014 Chapters:  ...170 171 -172- 173... 


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Tetrameter

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Ups and downs

by Treischel

My daddy's always saying this,
That life will have its ups and downs.
While staying in the middle is
so hard when fickle fortune frowns.

But dad is there with help for us,
To offset an unbalanced sway,
Providing weight without a fuss
To yield a very pleasant day.

Our life so often tetter-totters,
To leave us hanging in the air.
He's there to help his sons and daughters
each time our dear old dad is there.







With father's day coming up, I thought this picture of a dad with his children, helping them to balance each by using his feet, was a poignant fatherly scene. These people are strangers that I captured on my camera while on vacation at Shetec State Park in Southeastern Minnesota in August, 2012.
I think this captures the essence of a father quite well.

This poem is written in iambic tetrameter with a abab rhyme scheme. In the third stanza I used the feminine form of the meter, giving two matching lines (line 1 and 3) of 9 syllables ending on a soft accent. So, the meter then reads: da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM da.

This picture was taken by the author himself.
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