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Tanka

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Precarious Perch

by Treischel



Precarious perch
Indomitable spirit
Life lived on the edge
As roots tightly hold and cling
Triumphant arms reach the sky




Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry


Hang on! Survive and thrive.

This poem is a Tanka.
A tanka is another poetry type related to the haiku. The first three lines are unrhymed. They have a syllable count of five, seven, five like the haiku. But the last two lines both have seven syllables. So the syllable count is: (5, 7, 5, 7, 7). It contains 5 unrhymed lines. this structure is a guideline. To accomodamodate the Japanese structure it should contain 20 to 22 syllables with a short - long - short - long - long structure.
Photo by the author, taken in the early spring before the leaves have sprouted again.
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