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Quatrains with closing Envoi

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Floating Green

by Treischel

Floating Green
(Quatrains with Envoi)




I love the greenery in yon pool.
The Hyacinths add high color too.
Reflecting water gives it grace.
The manmade structures fill the space.

I cast mine eyes on floating green,
A sight that's simply so serene.
Reflected as the waters flow,
I dare to want to dip a toe.

And yet, I know,
'Twould spoil the show!





Aren't you tempted?

Simple aabb rhymed quatrains with closing rhymed couplet as an envoi.

This photograph was taken by the author himself outside the Como Park Conservatory in September 2013.
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