General Poetry posted November 21, 2013


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Walking to a New Side

by Hala Omar

When you're walking out with this gown
See the smiles on the faces thrown
When you're holding that report of respect
Look at those tears in your eyes which are your hearts elect
I know my buddy it's your last day here
But I won't cry or let you shade the tear
It's only the beginning of that cool life
Don't let your dream have a limit
Just wish that it seems like you have drawn
Look at yourself wearing this gown
You look amazing...
You are pretty and out of tone
I don't remember I saw you old!
But now I realized how much I'm far
Believe me my eyes are glowing, today you are an actual star...
Think of this moment and see your future
Close your eyes and dream to be mature
This is your day and it's your chance
Let all who's watching see you glance
And now you reached the last step of this round
But still you're going on... you have to record your sound
Save it in their hearts and it's already in mine...
It's your greatest day so write your words and complete this line...
By: Hala Omar



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


this poem is for my dearest friend
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