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A Triolet Poem about Loneliness

A chapter in the book Picture Poems

Children's Joy

by Treischel

Children's Joy



I watched children play in the field.

Their energy lifted my soul,

As tiny joy and laughter peeled.

I watched children play in the field,

As they ran and jumped and squealed.

Sitting alone, my heart they stole!

I watched children play in the field.

Their energy lifted my soul.





Children are innocent and carefree. Watching them can lift your spirits.
For this poem I imagined a lonely old person coming to the park and being renewed by their energy.

The photograph is from my own collection
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