The Look of Love
3-6-9 contest entry18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is well illustrated by a cute dog. It shows us the charcteristics of a love and loving pet.
Congrats for the honorable mention in the contest.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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This poem is well illustrated by a cute dog. It shows us the charcteristics of a love and loving pet.
Congrats for the honorable mention in the contest.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
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My pleasure, Debra.
Joan
Comment from sammielwf
Oh Deb
You had me at that sweet Springer Spaniel face! That puppy face and eyes and tongue and expression fit our sweet sweet boy Nagi Blue to a tee. Our boy is no longer a puppy.....but an old guy now...But you know what Deb....he still smells like biscuits to us.
He still wags his tale, give us his belly to rub and wraps his warmth around us at night when we go to sleep.
Yes, indeed The Look of Love says it all.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Oh Deb
You had me at that sweet Springer Spaniel face! That puppy face and eyes and tongue and expression fit our sweet sweet boy Nagi Blue to a tee. Our boy is no longer a puppy.....but an old guy now...But you know what Deb....he still smells like biscuits to us.
He still wags his tale, give us his belly to rub and wraps his warmth around us at night when we go to sleep.
Yes, indeed The Look of Love says it all.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Hi Sammielwf, thank you so much for your lovely comments and for introducing me to Nagi Blue! He sounds gorgeous ;)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your recognition for this charming poem. The closing stanza is especially delightful--now excuse me while I go smell my dog's back and rub his belly. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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Congrats on your recognition for this charming poem. The closing stanza is especially delightful--now excuse me while I go smell my dog's back and rub his belly. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
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LOL! Thank you so much Liz, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a precious pooch, but, more importantly, what a wonderful offering describing him!! ;) This one hardly needs the pic for the wonderful image you've painted for us, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Sorry so far behind - will be permanently "caught up" and "in a routine" by the end of the week (unless the 'unexpected' happens...lol!)
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Oh, what a precious pooch, but, more importantly, what a wonderful offering describing him!! ;) This one hardly needs the pic for the wonderful image you've painted for us, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Sorry so far behind - will be permanently "caught up" and "in a routine" by the end of the week (unless the 'unexpected' happens...lol!)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Yvette, for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your lovely feedback!
Hope you manage to catch up with yourself soon!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from The Death
Hi Debs,
Your love for Molly can be felt here. You have used this form effectively to convey three different qualities a pet dog has for his/her human. I love dogs so much, but can't keep one due to work. When pandemic is over, I'll finally have to go to the office. LOL. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck! :)
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Hi Debs,
Your love for Molly can be felt here. You have used this form effectively to convey three different qualities a pet dog has for his/her human. I love dogs so much, but can't keep one due to work. When pandemic is over, I'll finally have to go to the office. LOL. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck! :)
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Hey Anupam :)
Thanks for your lovely feedback.
Hope it's safe for you to go back the office soon. Working from home is nice (my husband has been working from our lounge since mid March) but sometimes, a bit of routine and structure is welcome!
Stay safe :)
Debs x
Comment from Urial
Hi there Debra!
Beautiful poem about the dog. I have 2 dogs a black cur and a pit bull. They both have the look of love which is God sent! (Dog spelled backward is God!) This is very positive message you have given us makes my day! Keep on writing from your eye look artist.
Peace be with you and yours,
Urial
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hi there Debra!
Beautiful poem about the dog. I have 2 dogs a black cur and a pit bull. They both have the look of love which is God sent! (Dog spelled backward is God!) This is very positive message you have given us makes my day! Keep on writing from your eye look artist.
Peace be with you and yours,
Urial
Comment Written 14-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Hello Urial :)
Thank you for the generous 6 star award and your lovely comments!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Margaret Bednar
Oh, I have two dogs I love like this - sweet eyes and eager little tails and the often smell so good - I just want to bury my nose in them. Yes, I understand "drinking" them in. what a sweet face - springer spaniels are also very smart!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Oh, I have two dogs I love like this - sweet eyes and eager little tails and the often smell so good - I just want to bury my nose in them. Yes, I understand "drinking" them in. what a sweet face - springer spaniels are also very smart!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Hi Margaret, thanks for your feedback. Yes, Springers are very clever! We have the best dogs, don?t we?!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can tell by your notes that you are a devoted dog lover and I have never thought of dogs smelling of biscuits before, but you have me thinking now Debra! Ha ha ha, this is a fun 3-6-9, much enjoyed, Molly must be quite adorable, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I can tell by your notes that you are a devoted dog lover and I have never thought of dogs smelling of biscuits before, but you have me thinking now Debra! Ha ha ha, this is a fun 3-6-9, much enjoyed, Molly must be quite adorable, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much, Dolly :)
Molly is a love!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from JudyE
Good luck in the 3-6-9 competition. I can just see Molly with an ever-wagging tail and refusing to sit still for you. Dogs are certainly incredibly devoted and great companions.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Good luck in the 3-6-9 competition. I can just see Molly with an ever-wagging tail and refusing to sit still for you. Dogs are certainly incredibly devoted and great companions.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank so much, Judy, for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a cutie. Your words describe this little puppy well. I could see everything you mentioned. For this contest you need 3 stanzas. Please revise if there is time.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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What a cutie. Your words describe this little puppy well. I could see everything you mentioned. For this contest you need 3 stanzas. Please revise if there is time.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hello Jan :)
Thank you so much for your great feedback.
I really appreciate you pointing out that a requirement of the contest was to have 3 stanzas - How silly of me to miss such an important detail!! I've added 2 more stanzas to my original poem.
Thanks again, Debra :) x
