NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "My Feet"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about our feet that to do much things we are not even thinking about. I agree comfortable dressed feet are happy feet and will do anything it is expected to do.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about our feet that to do much things we are not even thinking about. I agree comfortable dressed feet are happy feet and will do anything it is expected to do.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra! You're very nice. I hope you're doing well, especially in this pandemic. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
Comment from Joan E.
Again, I think most of us can relate to your response to leaving the safety of your home during this pandemic, even with a mask. Be strong and stay well- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Again, I think most of us can relate to your response to leaving the safety of your home during this pandemic, even with a mask. Be strong and stay well- Joan
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Anya Trofimova
I love the personification of the feet in your poem. The idea of feet having a mind of their own in fresh and engaging! Thank you for sharing and well done!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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I love the personification of the feet in your poem. The idea of feet having a mind of their own in fresh and engaging! Thank you for sharing and well done!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, My Feet, finds the biped, Atlas-under-ankles duo going along for a much needed drive to be reminded that walking, standing, driving, and shopping are all on them. If you learn to type with your toes or can hold a pencil between those digits you can give them even more responsibility. Surely you've been locked up long enough to consider it. : )
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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This free verse, My Feet, finds the biped, Atlas-under-ankles duo going along for a much needed drive to be reminded that walking, standing, driving, and shopping are all on them. If you learn to type with your toes or can hold a pencil between those digits you can give them even more responsibility. Surely you've been locked up long enough to consider it. : )
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi! You're funny and nice. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, the shoes aren't getting out are thy Alicia, the wonderful poem about this very thing is a great descriptive message these happenings around us at the moment. I suppose driving is at least letting the car exercise it's wheels, well done, Alicia, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Oh yes indeed, the shoes aren't getting out are thy Alicia, the wonderful poem about this very thing is a great descriptive message these happenings around us at the moment. I suppose driving is at least letting the car exercise it's wheels, well done, Alicia, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! You're funny and nice. Thank you. God bless you :)
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Good job
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem made me feel relaxed and happy. You chose to focus on the blessing of feet and the enjoyment of being able to go to a park and walk through the grocery store. (I just got back from one - very quiet there at night). Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Your poem made me feel relaxed and happy. You chose to focus on the blessing of feet and the enjoyment of being able to go to a park and walk through the grocery store. (I just got back from one - very quiet there at night). Enjoyed!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hiyah! I love exercise and walking, but really scared of this pandemic. It seems different outside. I wanted a happy poem. Glad your taking care of yourself nicely too. God bless you :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Even if you were not comfortable with the walk I think your poem exceeds your expectations. I love the start it's inviting us to follow you on this adventure :"
My feet
Slipped into comfortable shoes
And went for a walk, straight to the car.
They masterminded the pedals
Around the neighborhood,
To pickup a drivethru lunch,"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Even if you were not comfortable with the walk I think your poem exceeds your expectations. I love the start it's inviting us to follow you on this adventure :"
My feet
Slipped into comfortable shoes
And went for a walk, straight to the car.
They masterminded the pedals
Around the neighborhood,
To pickup a drivethru lunch,"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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You're nice. Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. Walking is a nice way to go. I see people walking past my house every day. People seem to enjoy getting out. I know that I do. I enjoyed your poem and the little feet. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. Walking is a nice way to go. I see people walking past my house every day. People seem to enjoy getting out. I know that I do. I enjoyed your poem and the little feet. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Hi Marilyn! I thought the writing prompt was rather psycho. The details you can pick up in a close-knit neighborhood is ridiculous. And it was religious Easter. I had to keep it vague. You're nice. Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
