NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Life Is Song"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing about your wonderful childhood. How fun to have been exposed to so many cultures early in life and yet you also got familiar with American culture, too. You probably had to interpret culture for your parents. I had to do that for my immigrant parents.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for sharing about your wonderful childhood. How fun to have been exposed to so many cultures early in life and yet you also got familiar with American culture, too. You probably had to interpret culture for your parents. I had to do that for my immigrant parents.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Hi! My parents were born in Trinidad & Tobago. They were British raised with subcultures. Americans and Britishs are similar. Thank you :)
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Ah, that's good that it wasn't such a drastic change for your parents. For mine, it was very different.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the influence your parents have on your choices in your life to become a singer, dancer, actress. The little songs we learn when we're small makes a big impact in our lives.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about the influence your parents have on your choices in your life to become a singer, dancer, actress. The little songs we learn when we're small makes a big impact in our lives.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hi Sandra! Thank you. Happy Mother's Day :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your memories of how your parents inspired you. I especially liked your title and all the farm animal sounds in the opening stanza. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for sharing your memories of how your parents inspired you. I especially liked your title and all the farm animal sounds in the opening stanza. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. A very nice poem about the joys of song. Every ethnic society sings and has its own preferences--joyous, romantic, religious, happy, sad and so on. I enjoyed hearing about your family. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. A very nice poem about the joys of song. Every ethnic society sings and has its own preferences--joyous, romantic, religious, happy, sad and so on. I enjoyed hearing about your family. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi Marilyn! This blending can probably only happen in the USA, Europe and Australia. There are plenty mixes too. I'm sure after the second stanza modifications can be made for other blends. Lolz. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from papa55mike
Music is one of the forces of peace in our lives. It can calm the savage beast or share the love. What a wonderfully written poem and I love all the videos. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Music is one of the forces of peace in our lives. It can calm the savage beast or share the love. What a wonderfully written poem and I love all the videos. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi Mike. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
How family and others helped and inspired you to feel and be inspired to be a poet and writer with the appreciation of living and realizing life is song; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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How family and others helped and inspired you to feel and be inspired to be a poet and writer with the appreciation of living and realizing life is song; well said, well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi! Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from royowen
I like this Alicia, I can see why you wanted to write poetry, I can tell you I never wanted particularly to write until I hit my forties. I loved this, you're a one off, you inspire with your natural desire to be a true individual, I like your writing, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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I like this Alicia, I can see why you wanted to write poetry, I can tell you I never wanted particularly to write until I hit my forties. I loved this, you're a one off, you inspire with your natural desire to be a true individual, I like your writing, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! I think being surrounded with it at home, made me take up writing even if just as a hobby. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
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Well done
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You describe quite a rainbow of memories and cultures, old Macdonald's farm, chitin and Koran enchanted in Arabic
. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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You describe quite a rainbow of memories and cultures, old Macdonald's farm, chitin and Koran enchanted in Arabic
. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Blended families are that way mixed. So many combinations too. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
