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NaPoWriMo 2020

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "An Easter Pandemic Story"
Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission

6 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Triolet about Easter time that we should celebrate and not allow the pandemic to blow out the flame if our spirit and make it a wondrous time to celebrate.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Now you got me concerned - there are crazy chicks with bunny rabbit ears? And they'll velcro us? Yikes. These must be Easter zombies?
I liked that Big Fish movie!
I hope you will get some peonies the next time you go to the store! â?¥

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Hi Helen! Easter doesn't feel the same this year. I wonder why...The lines to get in grocery stores. The lines to get out. I don't know if flowers can harbor coronavirus. Is it even safe?

    Thank you. Hoping you had a wonderful weekend. Happy Easter. God bless you :)
Comment from Joan E.
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I am sorry not even Easter could take you from this dark mood. I appreciated your rhymes and repeats plus the images of the "Crazy Lil Chicks" plus the luminescent eggs. Take good care of yourself- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Hi Joan! Hope you're doing well and happy at home eating bunny ears. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
reply by Joan E. on 13-Apr-2020
    Not so happy at home day after day, but my senses of smell and taste are intact--so, I assume I am virus free. Be strong- Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your triolet for your April challenge, Sunnulicious. Your lines and rhymes are great. The repeated lines fit in nicely wherever they appear. The picture is supporting. Your notes are informative except for the one about covid-taking us all out. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Hi Jan! Psycho bunnies exist too. Sorry for scaring you. You're nice. Thank you. Happy Easter :)
Comment from royowen
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Who's afraid of the big bad germ? I loved the movie clip, he promised the girl he wouldn't hurt the big guy. And he didn't, so the daffodil man won against the big scary guy, well done Alicia this is a marvellous triolet, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2020
    Hi Roy! You're nice. Thank you. God bless you. Hugs, Alicia
    Happy Easter :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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It's true we don't know what will happen with the pandemic and we have the option to think positively or negatively about it. I did like your whimsical poem and the film clip. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
    Hi Marilyn! Thank you. Hearts & hugs :)
    Happy Easter!