NaPoWriMo 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Bitter Ending"Annual napowrimo prologue and poetry submission
7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. This is very well done. Sylvia Plath was a tragic figure. Your poem combined with the image of her and the video are a well-working combo for the challenge. Hugs, Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Alicia. This is very well done. Sylvia Plath was a tragic figure. Your poem combined with the image of her and the video are a well-working combo for the challenge. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hi Marilyn! Thank you.
Happy Easter Weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Bitter Ending, mixes the current astronomical occurrences with all other chatterings which suggest cataclysmic events are in play. Great!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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This poem, A Bitter Ending, mixes the current astronomical occurrences with all other chatterings which suggest cataclysmic events are in play. Great!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi Bill! You're nice. Thank you
God bless you :)
Comment from royowen
I remember Ted Hughes, married to Sylvia Plath, I Heard he committed adultery, I heard her recite her poem 'Daddy' it was very downwind, and dark. I feel for you, on your own dear Alicia, I'll pray for you, bless you this Easter, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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I remember Ted Hughes, married to Sylvia Plath, I Heard he committed adultery, I heard her recite her poem 'Daddy' it was very downwind, and dark. I feel for you, on your own dear Alicia, I'll pray for you, bless you this Easter, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2020
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Hi Roy! I heard they both wronged each other. You're very kind. Maybe life has a upswing in love for me soon. Thank you. God bless you :)
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad you were inspired by the Twitter Tweets to write this reaction to the pandemic. Silvia Plat Bot's words are frightening but appropriate under the circumstances. I admired your countering them with "love". Be safe and well- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I am glad you were inspired by the Twitter Tweets to write this reaction to the pandemic. Silvia Plat Bot's words are frightening but appropriate under the circumstances. I admired your countering them with "love". Be safe and well- Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Joan! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the twitter feeds provided for the NaPoWriMo challenge for the day. It seems that the people of the world become weirder and weirder by the day.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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A very well-written poem about the twitter feeds provided for the NaPoWriMo challenge for the day. It seems that the people of the world become weirder and weirder by the day.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Sandra! Right. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
I used to like reading Sylvia Plath when I was in high school. That's a very interesting tweet that you chose to write about but these are depressing times so I understand. Poetry is a way to channel our truest feelings. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I used to like reading Sylvia Plath when I was in high school. That's a very interesting tweet that you chose to write about but these are depressing times so I understand. Poetry is a way to channel our truest feelings. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi Helen! I have never been a fan of Slyvia Plath. She was a popular read in NYC with the college crowd. However, I can handle her on a just quote basis. Lolz. So you're a fan. Very good. You're nice. Thank you :)
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I was a fan of Plath when I was in my teenage angst. Not so much now. ♥
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever word-play and alliteration... vice of knives (credit to Plath or her followers?) ...witch spits spirits...Wry remark: God has proven the devil is his favorite. Cheers. LIZ (effects of evil shines s/b shine)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Clever word-play and alliteration... vice of knives (credit to Plath or her followers?) ...witch spits spirits...Wry remark: God has proven the devil is his favorite. Cheers. LIZ (effects of evil shines s/b shine)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Hi LIz! You're nice. Thank you :)
