This Side Of The Window Pane
An eternal longing...21 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your love poem well received in the contest. I admired your free verse and parallel, mood-setting picture. You certainly conveyed the "ache" vividly. Well done- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Congratulations on having your love poem well received in the contest. I admired your free verse and parallel, mood-setting picture. You certainly conveyed the "ache" vividly. Well done- Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much! Such an honor since they don?t offer honorable mentions often. Appreciate your thoughtfulness. xoxo
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your recognition for this poignant piece. Vivid and alliterative re the shards of shattered glass. I was rooting for you to smash through. Sorry it didn't happen, Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Congrats on your recognition for this poignant piece. Vivid and alliterative re the shards of shattered glass. I was rooting for you to smash through. Sorry it didn't happen, Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Thank you for noticing. xoxo
Comment from LisaMay
'Destined for eternal longing' is such a sad place to be. You capture all the pathos of love denied in this gripping poem. There is passion and exasperation wrapped up in the emotion of 'love unending'.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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'Destined for eternal longing' is such a sad place to be. You capture all the pathos of love denied in this gripping poem. There is passion and exasperation wrapped up in the emotion of 'love unending'.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2019
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thanks my dear friend! I think it is one of my better ones for sure! appreciate your supportive comment! xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
The winner for the contest right here. A full presentation and so creative. It is filled with passion and love's longing. The ending pierces the heart of the reader.
Sending you my best today along with six stars for this outstanding work.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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The winner for the contest right here. A full presentation and so creative. It is filled with passion and love's longing. The ending pierces the heart of the reader.
Sending you my best today along with six stars for this outstanding work.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2019
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Mwah! So happy you enjoyed this and for the precious rating! It means so much to me that you waited to review! xoxoxoxo
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My pleasure entirely. Xoxo
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Told ya this would do well. Congratulations. xoxoxo
Comment from judiverse
Excellent free verse! It's a wonderful idea and best of luck in the contest. Your wording is beautiful and the imagery is so compelling--being on different sides of the window pane. This suggests the impossibility of ever getting together. You truly convey the longing, the desire to be on the other side of the window pane. judi
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Excellent free verse! It's a wonderful idea and best of luck in the contest. Your wording is beautiful and the imagery is so compelling--being on different sides of the window pane. This suggests the impossibility of ever getting together. You truly convey the longing, the desire to be on the other side of the window pane. judi
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thanks Judi! I saw the picture and the words just fell out. Normally it is writing that inspires the picture I choose, but in this case, it was the picture that inspired the words. Appreciate your kind review!! xoxo
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You're welcome. Such an interesting approach to your poem. judi
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Diana, well, if this is not a love poem, then tell me what is? it is stunning - beautifully composed, lovely display and your wording is just perfect. Great use of the window pane as a barrier that keeps the lovers apart - good use of metaphor. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Hello Diana, well, if this is not a love poem, then tell me what is? it is stunning - beautifully composed, lovely display and your wording is just perfect. Great use of the window pane as a barrier that keeps the lovers apart - good use of metaphor. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thank you sincerely for your kind words! xoxo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"This Side of the Window Pane", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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"This Side of the Window Pane", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Thank you sincerely, Duchess! I think I?ve grown so much since I joined this site. I am so happy that you appreciate this! xoxo
Diana,
You're very welcome. I certainly enjoyed your poem.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess xoxo
Comment from Larry5000
Very nice poem, very sensual, a love trying to be set free, if only for that one special moment, a moment of awakening where just one touch could set two souls on fire burning long into the night.
Great picture and great melody by Yanni.
Larry
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Very nice poem, very sensual, a love trying to be set free, if only for that one special moment, a moment of awakening where just one touch could set two souls on fire burning long into the night.
Great picture and great melody by Yanni.
Larry
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2019
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Hi Larry! My favorite style and theme! So happy you enjoyed this. I feel like I grow more and more with every one I write! xoxo
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That is a very real possibility. Hope all is well with you.
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And you also! xoxo
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Your very welcome, Sorry I have not been up here much.
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No worry, I hope everything is ok xoxo
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Yea for the most part all is good, been concentrating on other things I guess besides writing lately. Need to get back in the groove of things. Looking over all you have written. Hope things are better for you as well.
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Ok, glad to hear no health issues or anything! good to see you back at it! xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent free verse entry for the love poem contest. The emotion comes through clearly in the well-written lines. The concluding two-line verse is a strong finish.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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This is an excellent free verse entry for the love poem contest. The emotion comes through clearly in the well-written lines. The concluding two-line verse is a strong finish.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you! I found the picture and then the words just fell out of my pen! Haha! So happy you appreciate it!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a wonderful love poem. Something is separating these two people and whether it's something tangible or emotional, they cannot be together. The picture portrays that in an excellent manner. That's a blinding white wolf at my face yes I'll hold this up it was shining right in my face I wouldn't lie I'll put this up on us hold us up
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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This is a wonderful love poem. Something is separating these two people and whether it's something tangible or emotional, they cannot be together. The picture portrays that in an excellent manner. That's a blinding white wolf at my face yes I'll hold this up it was shining right in my face I wouldn't lie I'll put this up on us hold us up
Comment Written 29-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much! I found the picture and the words just fell out my pen! Haha! Appreciate you enjoyed!! xoxo
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Good heavens, I was talk texting and Tom was doing something to the TV and using a high powered flashlight which was blinding me. He said it can?t be that bad. It all came out in your review, so sorry,,
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Haha! I was wondering....LoL! I?ve done that myself before. Even been in car and voice texting and the radio voice on radio started appearing in my text lol!! Have a great evening!!! xoxo
