Thanksgiving Sonnet 2019
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Comment from Dutchie
poem Alicia with nice rhyme and syllable count. Not easy to write a poem of 10 syllables a line. You did it very well. Well these pelgrims and indians are living in me too. Such a pity we don't celebrate Thanksgiving here.
Fia
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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poem Alicia with nice rhyme and syllable count. Not easy to write a poem of 10 syllables a line. You did it very well. Well these pelgrims and indians are living in me too. Such a pity we don't celebrate Thanksgiving here.
Fia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Fia! You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Thanksgiving sonnet with lots of gratitude. Thanksgiving will not be special if there is always loads of delicious foods we can share with others.
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A very well-written Thanksgiving sonnet with lots of gratitude. Thanksgiving will not be special if there is always loads of delicious foods we can share with others.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Sandra! That is true. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is well done, Alicia. Thanksgiving is a wonderful holiday in which we can just relax, enjoy each other's company and eat good food. Nicely expressed throughout. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This is well done, Alicia. Thanksgiving is a wonderful holiday in which we can just relax, enjoy each other's company and eat good food. Nicely expressed throughout. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Marilyn! You enjoy that table full of vegetable side for me also. I'll be at the movie theatre all day. The single life. Lolz. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia :)
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Hi Alicia. Well, I'm single now, too. We have to prepare for holidays and special events to be with others. It's a good thing. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your celebration of Thanksgiving. I see the correct rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg and the 10 syllable lines but the rhythm isn't quite iambic at times. What I liked the best is how you focus on the connection of people from different worlds enjoying time together.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Enjoyed your celebration of Thanksgiving. I see the correct rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg and the 10 syllable lines but the rhythm isn't quite iambic at times. What I liked the best is how you focus on the connection of people from different worlds enjoying time together.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! I can write a sentence. I can write a poem. However, iambic-syllable counting-rhythm... It's a lot to do at one time. You're nice. Thank you. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Joan E.
You really do enjoy Thanksgiving--thank you for making me look forward to the holiday more. I enjoyed your rhymed sonnet and description of "spiced for living" along with the beckoning artworks. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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You really do enjoy Thanksgiving--thank you for making me look forward to the holiday more. I enjoyed your rhymed sonnet and description of "spiced for living" along with the beckoning artworks. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Joan! I do enjoy Thanksgiving. It's the movie theatre for me this year. You'll do something wonderful too. I'm sure. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia
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This will be our tenth, annual train trip with our son to San Luis Obispo. He's a rail buff and its an enjoyable tradition. Enjoy the movie theatre. More hugs- Joan
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great job with this Thanksgiving sonnet that expresses very clearly that you're looking forward to Thanksgiving. That's an interesting idea of having the Indians and Pilgrims living within you to share in the celebration. Thanks for sharing! Bill
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Great job with this Thanksgiving sonnet that expresses very clearly that you're looking forward to Thanksgiving. That's an interesting idea of having the Indians and Pilgrims living within you to share in the celebration. Thanks for sharing! Bill
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Bill! You're funny. But really, the past lives in all of us. Being single, I'll be at the movie theatre. Happy Thanksgiving. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Sonnet Poetry Contest.
This is a bright and colorful Thanksgiving greeting.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Sonnet Poetry Contest.
This is a bright and colorful Thanksgiving greeting.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! Thank you. Happy Thanksgiving. Hugs, Alicia :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Thanksgiving poem you have penned. You used very beautiful art work and very good descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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This is a very nice and well written Thanksgiving poem you have penned. You used very beautiful art work and very good descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi Teri. Thank you. Hearts & hugs, Alicia (aka Sunnilicious)
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I especially love the lines, those pilgrims and indians live in me/legends of the past, spiced for the living. what a joyous sonnet that celebrates Thanksgiving's past, its cultural and culinary delights, as well as the purpose of the holiday - to give t hanks!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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I especially love the lines, those pilgrims and indians live in me/legends of the past, spiced for the living. what a joyous sonnet that celebrates Thanksgiving's past, its cultural and culinary delights, as well as the purpose of the holiday - to give t hanks!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Thank you. Happy Thanksgiving :)
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I especially like the imagery you used and the way it flows. The ending is very nice too. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I especially like the imagery you used and the way it flows. The ending is very nice too. Thanks for sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! You're nice. Thank you :)
