He Was My Main Squeeze
He couldn't keep his hands off me. (50 words)18 total reviews
Comment from Carla Trinklein
An octopus! No, too touchy-feely. Better drop his itenticle twin, too. Even if you do share a love of poetry. These are certainly fun reads for the rest of us, though!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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An octopus! No, too touchy-feely. Better drop his itenticle twin, too. Even if you do share a love of poetry. These are certainly fun reads for the rest of us, though!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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I'm still having fun writing them so i'll keep going. Plenty more animals to be rejected by.
Comment from poetwatch
It must have been a tight squeeze to fit in all those arms, LisaMay. But I imagine that you have always been a hard woman to handle. :) So all these 50 worders make up your book? What would the title be? My boyfriends of the wild? Good write woman keep it up.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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It must have been a tight squeeze to fit in all those arms, LisaMay. But I imagine that you have always been a hard woman to handle. :) So all these 50 worders make up your book? What would the title be? My boyfriends of the wild? Good write woman keep it up.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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I quite liked that octopus who couldn't keep his hands off me... very touchy-feely.
Maybe the book title could be: Boyfriends can be such animals!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A piece of very well-written dating advice stay clear from the sucker who cannot keep his hand off you, he will overwhelm you and squeeze the life out of you.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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A piece of very well-written dating advice stay clear from the sucker who cannot keep his hand off you, he will overwhelm you and squeeze the life out of you.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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yum... he tasted nice after I bashed him to tenderise him then cooked him and served him with a Greek salad.
Comment from Sugarray77
Haha. Your use of witty made up words carried the day on this fun Octopus verse. You have added great scientific notes to show that you are adept at scholarly pursuits. Perhaps, these loser boyfriends do not like the fact that you are smarter than they are. LOL..
Fun!
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Haha. Your use of witty made up words carried the day on this fun Octopus verse. You have added great scientific notes to show that you are adept at scholarly pursuits. Perhaps, these loser boyfriends do not like the fact that you are smarter than they are. LOL..
Fun!
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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That could be true of some of my failed romances with other critters, but the octopus was very intelligent in his own way.
Thanks for your review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! A low-crab diet has got to be at the top my favs of your play-on-words, my lady! :) Ink Floyd... can't be much 'different' than the related Pink Floyd...LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing, L-M!! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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LOL!! A low-crab diet has got to be at the top my favs of your play-on-words, my lady! :) Ink Floyd... can't be much 'different' than the related Pink Floyd...LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing, L-M!! ;)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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It's good, isn't it! Thanks for your enthusiastic review.
Comment from BeasPeas
Great job with this fun poem, Lisa. Clever and amusing. Good word choices. Your series is wonderful and I wish you the best with it. I think it would be a hit to publish. Author's note is equally amusing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Great job with this fun poem, Lisa. Clever and amusing. Good word choices. Your series is wonderful and I wish you the best with it. I think it would be a hit to publish. Author's note is equally amusing. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. I do intend to put a book together with these. I have written the end story... just working my way through animals to get there.
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Very good job, Lisa. So enjoyable.
Comment from lyenochka
Octopuses are fascinating creatures. The Chinese characters for this creature is a 'literary fish.' It could be because of the 'ink.' I enjoyed all your fun puns especially the "low crab" diet!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Octopuses are fascinating creatures. The Chinese characters for this creature is a 'literary fish.' It could be because of the 'ink.' I enjoyed all your fun puns especially the "low crab" diet!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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A literary fish is a nice way to describe an octopus.
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey LesaMay. This is a funny poem in your series. You did an excellent job playing with words on this one. Some of the words are very clever and that makes it work. Robert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Hey LesaMay. This is a funny poem in your series. You did an excellent job playing with words on this one. Some of the words are very clever and that makes it work. Robert
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review, Robert. I'm pleased you liked it.
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You're welcome
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I really love this one. They're all great, actually, and should be made into an illustrated book for kids 8 to 80. You are very good at creating puns, a rare talent my hubby admires, :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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LOL! I really love this one. They're all great, actually, and should be made into an illustrated book for kids 8 to 80. You are very good at creating puns, a rare talent my hubby admires, :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your wonderful high rating. Your comment about making a book supports my own ideas for this series... it should appeal to a wide age range; some of the humour will go over younger readers' heads, but the adults will get it.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is one of your best, in my opinion. I love all the fun words you chose such as preoctopied and pulled a mussel.
I particularly got a chuckle out of the low-crab diet. Very entertaining, Lisa, and earned you the extra star. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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This is one of your best, in my opinion. I love all the fun words you chose such as preoctopied and pulled a mussel.
I particularly got a chuckle out of the low-crab diet. Very entertaining, Lisa, and earned you the extra star. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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I was pleased with this one also. Thanks for your brilliant review. Some critters are easier to write about than others.
