The Inquisitor
Loyalty to the crown7 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Scary stuff, Kace. Thank goodness that Peter the Large showed up to save him. Well written and you've described things that make your reader cringe. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Scary stuff, Kace. Thank goodness that Peter the Large showed up to save him. Well written and you've described things that make your reader cringe. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Hello Mrs Birdie! Thanks for reading; not my genre, thought I would give it a try. You could hide under the bird house? Hee, Hee. Love, K.
Comment from JLR
Writer your execution of pulling your character and plot through the ages is very solid. The imagery and the dialogue place the reader into the historical events of the past. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Writer your execution of pulling your character and plot through the ages is very solid. The imagery and the dialogue place the reader into the historical events of the past. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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JLR, Thanks so much for your kind review. Glad you enjoyed. Cheers, K.
Comment from robyn corum
Aussie,
Well, this is one of the more horrific posts I have ever read here on FanStory. Nice work. I definitely think you need to add a flag for violence, please.
The writing was well done and graphic as all get-out. I'm confused why you categorized this as a 'script', though. It should do well in the voting. Well done. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Aussie,
Well, this is one of the more horrific posts I have ever read here on FanStory. Nice work. I definitely think you need to add a flag for violence, please.
The writing was well done and graphic as all get-out. I'm confused why you categorized this as a 'script', though. It should do well in the voting. Well done. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much Robyn. I didn't think it was as horrific as they asked us to write! It's not my genre. Blessings, K.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very vivid write about torture... ugh. I think your handling of the story was very well done and kept this reader on the edge of the seat. Good luck in this contest!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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This is a very vivid write about torture... ugh. I think your handling of the story was very well done and kept this reader on the edge of the seat. Good luck in this contest!!
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Hi Melissa, Thanks so much for reading. Not my genre. Still, thought I would have a go. Blessings, K.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a complete and compelling story within the word count restrictions. I thought the topic an interesting choice for Horror, but the content leads the reader cleanly in that direction. Good luck in the judging and thank you vey much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a complete and compelling story within the word count restrictions. I thought the topic an interesting choice for Horror, but the content leads the reader cleanly in that direction. Good luck in the judging and thank you vey much for sharing it.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you Elaine? Hope that's right? I'm not a horror writer, just the opposite. Thought I would give it a go. Love, Kay.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
very interesting. I'm glad the giant came to rescue Peter and not to make things worse. Is this the beginning of something longer? Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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very interesting. I'm glad the giant came to rescue Peter and not to make things worse. Is this the beginning of something longer? Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Hi Darlene, No, it's just a script for the contest. Thanks for reading. Horror ain't my thing. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from tfawcus
You've certainly managed to bring the horrors of medieval torture out in a most graphic way! I thought poor Thomas was finished for sure! It'll take a good healer to put him back together.
Just one suggestion for the contest, and that's to capitalise The Crow towards the end.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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You've certainly managed to bring the horrors of medieval torture out in a most graphic way! I thought poor Thomas was finished for sure! It'll take a good healer to put him back together.
Just one suggestion for the contest, and that's to capitalise The Crow towards the end.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Hello Tony, Thank you for reading, you obviously enjoyed. Thanks for the six shiny stars! Blessings, Kay.
