Smile
There is nothing as lovely16 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
I taught pre-school education for 20 years, I know those beautiful smiles so well. They absolutely do make life worthwhile. Congrats on the contest placement.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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I taught pre-school education for 20 years, I know those beautiful smiles so well. They absolutely do make life worthwhile. Congrats on the contest placement.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much
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:)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your words in this lovely one-liner, which
is a breath of fresh air--just like the sweet, innocent smile it describes.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your words in this lovely one-liner, which
is a breath of fresh air--just like the sweet, innocent smile it describes.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much Janice for your great review. Jen.
Comment from lyenochka
Awww! What a gorgeous and sweet smile! Yes, I think children's smiles and laughter makes life so wonderful. I like how you wove into the one liner a rhyme!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Awww! What a gorgeous and sweet smile! Yes, I think children's smiles and laughter makes life so wonderful. I like how you wove into the one liner a rhyme!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Many thanks. Jen.
Comment from Ross E Silke
Yes, it does! Wonderful one line poem and I like how you cleverly rhyme smile and worthwhile. Excellently done! A joy to read and you rpicture is perfect! I like the colours you've chosen too! Beautiful! A lovely display! Best,
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Yes, it does! Wonderful one line poem and I like how you cleverly rhyme smile and worthwhile. Excellently done! A joy to read and you rpicture is perfect! I like the colours you've chosen too! Beautiful! A lovely display! Best,
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Many thanks for the great review. Jen.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and nice presentation, Jen.
-The rhyme in your monostich
is very effective.
-You also have a good message;
there isn't anything like
the delightful smile of a child.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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-Very nice image
and nice presentation, Jen.
-The rhyme in your monostich
is very effective.
-You also have a good message;
there isn't anything like
the delightful smile of a child.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Pam.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree and when I see my grandchildren smile, my whole world changes and becomes worth living, I wish you luck with your one liner, you made me smile today Jen, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I so agree and when I see my grandchildren smile, my whole world changes and becomes worth living, I wish you luck with your one liner, you made me smile today Jen, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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I'm so glad it made you smile Dolly. Thanks.Love Jen. X
Comment from l.raven
HI Jen, such true words my sweet friend...
a little girls smile can light up a dark night...
can make you happy when your sad...I love your poem
sweet girl...and your picture is precious...good luck in the contest...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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HI Jen, such true words my sweet friend...
a little girls smile can light up a dark night...
can make you happy when your sad...I love your poem
sweet girl...and your picture is precious...good luck in the contest...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Linda. Much appreciated. Jen.x
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you are so welcome Jen...love xxoo
Comment from DR DIP
What a gorgeous picture that compliments your one liner perfectly jenintorre
"A little girl's smile makes life worthwhile." are the innocence of childhood! thankyou so much for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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What a gorgeous picture that compliments your one liner perfectly jenintorre
"A little girl's smile makes life worthwhile." are the innocence of childhood! thankyou so much for sharing
dip
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Many thanks Dip. Much appreciated. Jen.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Jenin,
Awww, what an adorable ichild, and a poem to match her smile. Lovely visual presentation. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your work. Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Hi Jenin,
Awww, what an adorable ichild, and a poem to match her smile. Lovely visual presentation. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing your work. Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much Jan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem with a very good punch. The only thing that can light up a face is a little child's innocent spontaneous smile to make us smile with a warmth in our hearts.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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A very well-written one-line poem with a very good punch. The only thing that can light up a face is a little child's innocent spontaneous smile to make us smile with a warmth in our hearts.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thanks Sandra