The Mystic Bridge
Fabulous Free Verse Club32 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Yvonne. You've done a great job with this interesting "take" on the theme of bridges. Excellent word choices to complete your mysterious theme. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Hi Yvonne. You've done a great job with this interesting "take" on the theme of bridges. Excellent word choices to complete your mysterious theme. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I'm happy you like it. I wanted it to be a mysterious. Be careful of bridges, now. LOL Thank you.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love your mystic bridge topic in this Free Verse challenge Yvonne. The imagination could take this as the final bridge to whatever awaits beyond. Great presentation and great free verse.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Love your mystic bridge topic in this Free Verse challenge Yvonne. The imagination could take this as the final bridge to whatever awaits beyond. Great presentation and great free verse.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you. I was hoping for mystical, and you got it.
Comment from Treischel
You cleverly took this image of a bridge in fog, and created a haunting tale of pending doom here within this well written Free Verse poem. It does give one pause. Good luck in the challenge, This should do well.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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You cleverly took this image of a bridge in fog, and created a haunting tale of pending doom here within this well written Free Verse poem. It does give one pause. Good luck in the challenge, This should do well.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you. That was the result I was hoping for.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a lovely short piece of mysterious free verse about a bridge. There is a thinly veiled threat in there as well because of those who ventured on to it and never returned. Fantastically and mysteriously brilliant. I have no hesitation in tagging this with six stars.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This is a lovely short piece of mysterious free verse about a bridge. There is a thinly veiled threat in there as well because of those who ventured on to it and never returned. Fantastically and mysteriously brilliant. I have no hesitation in tagging this with six stars.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Wow! Thank you, Jim. That means a lot to me. Thank you for the lovely comments as well as the stars.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good choice of artwork
and nice presentation.
-I like your poem, as well.
-The imagery is good and
adds to the mystery of the bridge.
-I like "the circling miasma"
and the question at the end.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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-Good choice of artwork
and nice presentation.
-I like your poem, as well.
-The imagery is good and
adds to the mystery of the bridge.
-I like "the circling miasma"
and the question at the end.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank YOU for reviewing. Always appreciated. I'm glad you like that part. It's my favorite.
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Yvonne,
I think I'll avoid stepping on the bridge of no return,
but it is just fine in a nicely written free verse poem.
Your poem would make an excellent introduction for a scary novel.
Excellent imagery and matching photo.
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Hello Yvonne,
I think I'll avoid stepping on the bridge of no return,
but it is just fine in a nicely written free verse poem.
Your poem would make an excellent introduction for a scary novel.
Excellent imagery and matching photo.
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you. I'm not going on it either. I'm glad you found it spooky. 8-)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This piece is written both the entertain and mesmerize the reader. Very well done in in description in free verse and yet allowing our imagination to wander
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This piece is written both the entertain and mesmerize the reader. Very well done in in description in free verse and yet allowing our imagination to wander
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Barb. That's what I intended. Where did your imagination lead you?
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IN three different directions. One of horror, one of spiritual, one of adventure.
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Ooooo, wonderful! Thank you.
Comment from tfawcus
A mysterious bridge with some metaphoric intent, I think. It seems to stand for many a journey into the unknown. Your last lines flow beautifully off the tongue - just loved them!
"lurking
in the circling
miasma
of gray vapor"
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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A mysterious bridge with some metaphoric intent, I think. It seems to stand for many a journey into the unknown. Your last lines flow beautifully off the tongue - just loved them!
"lurking
in the circling
miasma
of gray vapor"
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I'm glad you like that part, Tony. It's my favorite, too, and I was afraid no one would take notice of it. Thank you for a lovely review. I hope all is well with you. Haven't heard anything about Teagan lately.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ooooo......a mysterious bridge to nowhere or somewhere....it's up to my imagination to decide! :) Love the complete veil of secrecy you've created through words and shortened format here, Yvonne, while still whetting the appetite for more! ;) Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Ooooo......a mysterious bridge to nowhere or somewhere....it's up to my imagination to decide! :) Love the complete veil of secrecy you've created through words and shortened format here, Yvonne, while still whetting the appetite for more! ;) Thank you for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reviewing. I'm happy you found it mysterious. I was hoping for that. 8-)
Comment from seaglass
Bridges are mystical to be sure. How often are used as metaphors. Different people think of them in different ways. My friend was always terrified of them and avoid them at all cost. I thrill at them because they make connections otherwise, impossible. Your poem relates them to unknown endings, another interesting interpretation of a bridge.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Bridges are mystical to be sure. How often are used as metaphors. Different people think of them in different ways. My friend was always terrified of them and avoid them at all cost. I thrill at them because they make connections otherwise, impossible. Your poem relates them to unknown endings, another interesting interpretation of a bridge.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I know people who don't like them. I'm like you. I like a bridge, especially some of the older ones with character.
