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Beautiful Angelic Accident

Wilson's Bird of Paradise

9 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Yvette!
Wow! What a spectacular bird! He has a Jamaican thing going on there! :) And here I thought I knew my birds; this colorful guy is definitely new to me! Your poem is as energetic as your friend! Love it!

diane

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    This is my favorite of the Birds of Paradise, Diane -- absolutely love them all, but this guy is special among them....think it's that tail of his! :) Thanx for dropping by, ma'am and blessings for the weekend up there! :) Yvette
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Wow. What an amazingly beautiful bird! Your photo and information are wonderful. Love to read a great little poem and learn all at the same time. Enjoyed your description/word choice "finger paints." Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the review, Cindy -- always appreciated! :) Yvette
Comment from Jaye Bennett
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The colors on this bird truly are magnificent. I like the way you use the same colors in the text. Nice color segue. I appreciate the extended afternote explain the origin of the different colors and whether it is skin pigment or feathers. Good job.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, Jaye -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
reply by Jaye Bennett on 09-Jan-2019
    A unique member of the bird world.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how the Wilson's Bird of Paradise is produced, colours have combined to make the angelic accident in the game; well said, well done. Write inspire change for 1234 Years--- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
Comment from AdaJulie
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Very fascinating and imformative. Your flow is organized well, for a few words you packed in information needed. Great job on this little one. Well done

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, Ada -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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Wow! I've never seen this bird until now. I'll be fifty-seven Friday, and since I've been all over the world, one would think I'd have seen every bird there is. But I guess I was wrong. This bird is beyond words. It looks made up. I will have to find out more about it.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, beatpoet -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
Comment from babykoala
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Well done! you perfectly portrayed this gorgeous little bird in very few words so that is a real skill, and loved reading your description of the bird too as I had never seen one before.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, babykoala -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Wow! What brilliant colors beautify this lovely bird! Love your descriptive 5-7-5 piece on this amazing creature. To "paint" its colors within your poem is the perfect analogy! Wonderfully composed!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, Mimi -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is such a colourful presentation and your words add a splash of hope and faith along with the vibrant colour, such a wonderful colourful bird and picture painted here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2019
    Thanx for the read and review, Dolly -- much appreciated. :) Have a great remainder of the week! :)