Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like how Jason is speaking here in poetic form. It is comforting and shows him having a life in heaven. I also like how he mentions his mother is there with him and is doing fine.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thanks Eileen.
She needed to be with him and not his four daughters and me.
But I understand.
I saw her suffering and she started to lose hr mind.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Renee J. St.Germain

Excellent

First of all, I'd like to send my sympathies to you in regards to your loss. Secondly, I enjoyed reading your poem. I liked how you wrote it. Despite the tragedy, you were able to weave in an uplifting spirit in that others could live because of the organ donations.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Just a Niche I was forced to learn!
Thanks Renee..
Saint Germain.
Dr Ricky 1024
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Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

Your son's final goodbyes. I do believe people who've passed would say something to that effect. Let us know that everything will be alright, that they're watching over us and that they are at peace. It's very well-written, interesting, great word choice gets your point across nicely, great job.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Glad you enjoyed tis one Mistydawn.
Thanks,
Ricky...

Comment from heavenempress

Excellent

This is the most exciting and the work of a skilled writer. Your poetry is following a certain so skilful pattern which I had not seen before. I follow the pattern throughout from the perspective of a departed person remembering the living. Correct me if am wrong. Keep it up!!

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Thanks and catch my newest release...
"Venomous!
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Comment from heart of Lou

Excellent

This is rather a tragic poem, but of course, not all tragic, because he is in Heaven and happy. I'm not sure why you have quotation marks on each line, but you maybe have your reasons. There are a few typos
the 4th line should be sisters, not sister's
ride in the car with 'you' sister Kyle should be 'your'

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2018

Cleaned it up and catch my newest release...
"Venomous!"
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Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderfully penned tribute from the perspective of your beloved and such an awesome testimony to the blessed gift of rebirth that can be found in tragedies. Your words are always such a gentle reminder of so much lost yet so much to experience...thank you! :) :)

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time Miss Rodgers.
Dr Ricky 1024.