Can you
Acrostic-Loop poem41 total reviews
Comment from Galactia
Hello,
What an excellent little poem. Another acrostic loop poem. I am having a hard time mastering this form. I haven't entered this contest and just realized it's a fanstory contest. I am going to give it a go and all your acrostic loop poems flow so well even when they're not rhyming. I can't get any of mine to flow good.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Hello,
What an excellent little poem. Another acrostic loop poem. I am having a hard time mastering this form. I haven't entered this contest and just realized it's a fanstory contest. I am going to give it a go and all your acrostic loop poems flow so well even when they're not rhyming. I can't get any of mine to flow good.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 02-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
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Thank you my Friend, and yes have a go, no cost nothing to lose, I thought the last one of yours was quite smooth****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Can you", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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"Can you", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2018
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Wow! thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
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***kahpot,
As always, you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from homewriter
The art work gave me a picture of a person confused then as I read the poem I loved how it matched the picture to me. Very creative A picture is worth a thousand words
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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The art work gave me a picture of a person confused then as I read the poem I loved how it matched the picture to me. Very creative A picture is worth a thousand words
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Without being funny was it worth more than the 1-star rating you gave it****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Artists who've penned thoughts neverending
Neverending words that live through time...you do pretty well at comprehending mine your reviews are always top notch. This is a great entry for the competition well done and good luck much love Meia xx
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Artists who've penned thoughts neverending
Neverending words that live through time...you do pretty well at comprehending mine your reviews are always top notch. This is a great entry for the competition well done and good luck much love Meia xx
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much always appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Zue65
I just love reading this poem again and again. Love the repetition of words neverending which intensified your message to the readers. The repetition of the phrase I can't in the beginning and the last line is a smart technique to drive home your point and humbling message. Very well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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I just love reading this poem again and again. Love the repetition of words neverending which intensified your message to the readers. The repetition of the phrase I can't in the beginning and the last line is a smart technique to drive home your point and humbling message. Very well done.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for this encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from Mike J
Really cool I can't poem, I really like the different forms you fit into one short poem. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Really cool I can't poem, I really like the different forms you fit into one short poem. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from damommy
You did a great job with the acrostic-loop poem. Both can be hard to do, but you did an excellent job.
Good presentation, too. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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You did a great job with the acrostic-loop poem. Both can be hard to do, but you did an excellent job.
Good presentation, too. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Shanbreen
Kahpot, this is such a well written acrostic-loop poem. The loop can be hard to do, but you did a great job with the flow. I love the visual. Hope you win the "I can't" poetry contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Kahpot, this is such a well written acrostic-loop poem. The loop can be hard to do, but you did a great job with the flow. I love the visual. Hope you win the "I can't" poetry contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from friartuck
Very good acrostic, and a great idea for this contest! Word choice is spot on, as is the loop format. It's a comfortable read, and I enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Very good acrostic, and a great idea for this contest! Word choice is spot on, as is the loop format. It's a comfortable read, and I enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from LIJ Red
First exposure I had to neverending was a local preacher who spoke of the neverending torments of Hell...ambitious, an acrostic loop poem. Well done.
Acrostics are a tough undertaking.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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First exposure I had to neverending was a local preacher who spoke of the neverending torments of Hell...ambitious, an acrostic loop poem. Well done.
Acrostics are a tough undertaking.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, smart preacher****kahpot
