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Holiday and Holyday Poetry

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religious and holiday poetry

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yep you fought for freedom and gained independence from he Brits and you have never let us forget it Donna! He he he, happy 4th July celebrations, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your rating and comments. Dove
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi dovemarie. I posted a different one just a minute ago about Independence Day. What made you write a teacup dictionary poem for this one. There was a club contest here awhile back for this kind of poem. Your words got everything right about Independence Day. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
    Dear Pamusart, I just thought I'd write a little poem, I wasn't thinking too hard, and a thought a short teacup was the best thing I could do at the time. Dove
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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How fun! I don't think I've run across this type poem before, but it is clear as to why it is labeled as such -- thank you for sharing your wonderful interpretation of Independence in such an interesting format!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Dear Y.M., Thank you for your comments and rating. I learned this form of poem from meeshu. I think it's cute. And tasty, too! Dove Every now and then I enjoy a nice cup of tea. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
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As an American, I see there are some problems in our nation, but not nearly as big as the media is making then out to be. May the flag of my nation long wave and we will be blessed with freedom, and begin to work together instead of tearing each other down. Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
    Dear Patricia, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove