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Love's Instinct

5-7-5 poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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It's really heartbreaking when we see one of our loved ones in the hospital or even if they're just sick at home. And that inner knowing lets us know or feel what's going on. We want to do whatever we can but reality lets us know in some cases that if we give them a big kiss and a hug and embrace them we feel better even if they don't but I know they do because we're showing whatever form of love we know to do at that . And thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
    Dear Mary, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 09-Mar-2018
    My pleasure Dove
Comment from William Ross
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Very good, it is a story in a 5.75 form. the instinct of knowing something is wrong. good entry, best of luck. have a great day

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
    Dear William, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
A bit different from the others
Sometimes, events can make emotions very clear
Excellent picture of the hospital with the field of flowers
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
    Dear RS, thank you for your comments and review. Dove