The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from Trudi Perkins
A lovely read.Well written Ricky. I can feel your pain through your writing. I'm so sorry you had to experience that. I am grieving through my poetry and it seems to be helping me. It's very therapeutic. Take care Ricky, God bless!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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A lovely read.Well written Ricky. I can feel your pain through your writing. I'm so sorry you had to experience that. I am grieving through my poetry and it seems to be helping me. It's very therapeutic. Take care Ricky, God bless!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks Trudy to grieve or not to grieve that is the question or ask rivers are all unfortunately heading in the unpassionate direction as we again perceive and pick another selection review in a form of poetic review of year review of course my dear Trudy dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem tells the story, one day away, son Jason says, father poet thinks life after death of his only son; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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This poem tells the story, one day away, son Jason says, father poet thinks life after death of his only son; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I can't even begin to imagine what this must feel like. This is the kind of loss that burdens down mind, body, and soul. You gave me a glimpse of it through your writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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I can't even begin to imagine what this must feel like. This is the kind of loss that burdens down mind, body, and soul. You gave me a glimpse of it through your writing. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks Jeffrey Yukon thoughts and review dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ricky, I'm sorry...I cried...it had to be so hard Ricky to go through all of this...and then decide to donate his heart...I bet he talks to you everyday...and you him...some times Ricky we don't see red flags flying...and when we do...we don't stop...sigh...very well written my sweet friend...and always a wonderful picture...priceless...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hi Ricky, I'm sorry...I cried...it had to be so hard Ricky to go through all of this...and then decide to donate his heart...I bet he talks to you everyday...and you him...some times Ricky we don't see red flags flying...and when we do...we don't stop...sigh...very well written my sweet friend...and always a wonderful picture...priceless...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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I will let you know why my son is special first thing was he knew about his death like Christ we have a picture taken 20 minutes for the accident showing that as he's trying to form a heart with his hands and my granddaughter Sasha who back then was only a child and just graduate high school with a big smile arm stretched out showing the sign of the cross and angel wings the second thing was he had started a band and and and he had saved for lies not just with his heart and lungs by with his kidneys and his liver called four ways to see that's exactly what he did to save for people's lives 14 years ago and three out of four still alive today his Spirit had been seen and witnessed in shook up a pair of teenagers driving to a party at my daughter Dana was at described him at the pool the site of the accident in the four colored clothing that he hadn't worn in the original accident my daughter came home crying there's been many many other examples of similar things is that this come across to me that let you believe that there are things out there that we don't understand it or going on but they do happen thanks for your view Ricky
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that is amazing Ricky...sigh...your so welcome ...God Bless...love xxoo
Comment from Rasmine
Dr. Ricky,
Hello. I am so sorry. I can't believe that is what happened. A suicide club? I remember these in school. I belonged to one, but no one ever died. I'm so sorry that happened to you.
Love,
Nome
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Dr. Ricky,
Hello. I am so sorry. I can't believe that is what happened. A suicide club? I remember these in school. I belonged to one, but no one ever died. I'm so sorry that happened to you.
Love,
Nome
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks for this razman suicide Club issue was never proven of course but the kid was very extremely depressed on a medication for only adults called effexor and he was only 17 thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from robina1978
A very nice photo of your son, that complements your story/poem very good. I seem to remember from a long time ago that you really lost a son. With this poem you bring him closer to us. I did not know Tom did art as well. A joy to read and review.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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A very nice photo of your son, that complements your story/poem very good. I seem to remember from a long time ago that you really lost a son. With this poem you bring him closer to us. I did not know Tom did art as well. A joy to read and review.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu
Hi Ricky,
A poem with many layers of meanings. I read it at least 5 times before I could start writing a review. Its a well written poem based on a grim scene of Intensive Care Unit. God! How blessed we are who can walk and run and do what we want. To be healthy is a blessing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hi Ricky,
A poem with many layers of meanings. I read it at least 5 times before I could start writing a review. Its a well written poem based on a grim scene of Intensive Care Unit. God! How blessed we are who can walk and run and do what we want. To be healthy is a blessing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Gloria ....
Car accidents are horrific and so completely jar everything in our being.
You've done well with your poem, although I don't know why you use all the quotation marks? Is there a reason for that, that I don't know.
Nonetheless a strong poem and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Car accidents are horrific and so completely jar everything in our being.
You've done well with your poem, although I don't know why you use all the quotation marks? Is there a reason for that, that I don't know.
Nonetheless a strong poem and thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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To emphasize importance and thanks Gloria.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from frierajac
This all sounds like Eastern seaboard pizzaz on pharma highjinx. I guess it does express your feelings about a less than joyful ride in a way that is inoffensive to all
your readers.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This all sounds like Eastern seaboard pizzaz on pharma highjinx. I guess it does express your feelings about a less than joyful ride in a way that is inoffensive to all
your readers.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from RGstar
Yes, Rick. You got me on this one. When understanding your presentation technique, and their values to you, one realizes it is your own form, and when overlooked, we get down to the real nitty gritty, we find the soul of the write...and this was powerful indeed. Good metaphoric writing. Out of body expressions which leave little room for understanding the impact, both of the write, as well the devastation, both mentally and physically.
This was power-packed in delivery when looking past the presentation we have come to know as your own.
Injections of said, without saying, brings this home.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Yes, Rick. You got me on this one. When understanding your presentation technique, and their values to you, one realizes it is your own form, and when overlooked, we get down to the real nitty gritty, we find the soul of the write...and this was powerful indeed. Good metaphoric writing. Out of body expressions which leave little room for understanding the impact, both of the write, as well the devastation, both mentally and physically.
This was power-packed in delivery when looking past the presentation we have come to know as your own.
Injections of said, without saying, brings this home.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks G star and my son Jason appreciates your six stars there is another one following this even more powerful dr. Ricky 1024
