Whisper
lune contest14 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Congratulations on the success of this. Happy that it kindled your reviewers and the voters. I love the warm colors of the color scheme and the artwork. Silhouettes are big with me.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Congratulations on the success of this. Happy that it kindled your reviewers and the voters. I love the warm colors of the color scheme and the artwork. Silhouettes are big with me.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very nice, really well done.
Only personal preference, but I'd suggest dropping the capital letters, if you're to follow the convention and leave this entirely unpunctuated. Only for aesthetic reasons, it obviously doesn't hinder the poem, at all.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Very nice, really well done.
Only personal preference, but I'd suggest dropping the capital letters, if you're to follow the convention and leave this entirely unpunctuated. Only for aesthetic reasons, it obviously doesn't hinder the poem, at all.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from Leineco
A very evocative poem...the reader (me) must admit
what you've done here is evoke the question - - -
Whatever could he/she have said, to rekindle that
which was lost? Which, of course, sent me off on
a path of even more questioning.
A powerful thing for a poem to do :-)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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A very evocative poem...the reader (me) must admit
what you've done here is evoke the question - - -
Whatever could he/she have said, to rekindle that
which was lost? Which, of course, sent me off on
a path of even more questioning.
A powerful thing for a poem to do :-)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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What a wonderful review
Comment from Cycler
Sweet and romantic. The colors are a nice night-time, lover's hue. It sets a valentine's hue for these two. I guess that is the time to regain what was seemingly lost. Your poem is very good - a wonderful mood setter
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Sweet and romantic. The colors are a nice night-time, lover's hue. It sets a valentine's hue for these two. I guess that is the time to regain what was seemingly lost. Your poem is very good - a wonderful mood setter
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you, for the lovely review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Lune Poetry contest. Your syllable count works and the meaning of your poem is enhanced by the artwork you chose. Good luck!
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Lune Poetry contest. Your syllable count works and the meaning of your poem is enhanced by the artwork you chose. Good luck!
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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thank you
Comment from Ricky1024
The saloon contest entry was well-written rich and team was wasn't imagery as it flowed well it red well with no grammar issues as well ejecting an object the contents will gracefully in place along with descriptive measures lining perfectly thanks for dissing good luck talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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The saloon contest entry was well-written rich and team was wasn't imagery as it flowed well it red well with no grammar issues as well ejecting an object the contents will gracefully in place along with descriptive measures lining perfectly thanks for dissing good luck talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This s the most disjointed review I have ever received. I think Ricky 1024 is out of sorts or drunk.
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I don't use my laptop my Acer do most of it in through the cell phone is quicker and it always screws up the grammar sorry about that we're actually drinking tonight but we're not all drunk specially-made dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery that went together well. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery that went together well. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Teri.
Comment from l.raven
HI Val, sometimes all it takes is just a soft voice to light the flames in two lovers hearts...so very nicely written sweet girl...and I love your picture...very well written you...and good luck in the contest...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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HI Val, sometimes all it takes is just a soft voice to light the flames in two lovers hearts...so very nicely written sweet girl...and I love your picture...very well written you...and good luck in the contest...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Thank you, dear Linda, it takes a lot to keep love alive, but without it there is nothing. Hugs
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Hi Val, if the love is true for both...it is worth fighting for...and you are so right....without it you have nothing...hugs back to ya...love xxoo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In romantic erotic manifestation, often one loses passion, this is well said in a few words, nicely and clearly, wish you good luck in the contest. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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In romantic erotic manifestation, often one loses passion, this is well said in a few words, nicely and clearly, wish you good luck in the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you for such a positive and lovely review.
Comment from Sugarray77
A very good Lune Poetry and will be a good entry for Lune Poetry writing prompt contest. The artwork is a good choice and adds the right touch to your verses. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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A very good Lune Poetry and will be a good entry for Lune Poetry writing prompt contest. The artwork is a good choice and adds the right touch to your verses. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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thank you
