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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Break These Chains?(A)"A Collection of My best works.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
The agonies endured ease the suffering of those who have nobody to pray for them and so you, my friend, are doing much for the suffering of others in this world by sharing yours. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
The agonies endured ease the suffering of those who have nobody to pray for them and so you, my friend, are doing much for the suffering of others in this world by sharing yours. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Can a human being to a degree feel the pain of the struggles of this Earth when I've written about the seven laws of judication based on 7 Deadly Sins starting with the people who her hopelessly addicted to drugs alcohol and other medications to the tobacco industry that is killing us to the oil industry that's polluting our air water and land and killing us to the banking industry that stealing us some robbing Us blind tell same with the Telecommunications the same with lack of monopolization laws to and based on Hometown business being crushed by giants like Walmart and then the most important 7th of course I saved for last is lack of religion the world is going to hell in a handbasket very very quickly since nine-one-one Earth stopped spinning forward on its axis is now going backwards and get worse when world war starts eventually with the alien races the whole entire planet will be plummeted directly on a pathway into the sun you watch and see thanks for your review Mystic Angel dr. Ricky 1024 and?
Comment from emptypage
Hmmm. Have to be honest, Ricky. You need to expand your subject matter.
Is most of this from the book of Mormon? In any case, it is slow, repetitive, and without story.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
Hmmm. Have to be honest, Ricky. You need to expand your subject matter.
Is most of this from the book of Mormon? In any case, it is slow, repetitive, and without story.
Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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So now I see you're attacking a person's religion on a beautiful piece that I wrote on the loss of my son who gave his organs and my dead wife who committed suicide because of the loss of her child obviously you don't have any children and thank God for that
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Chains are a tough thing to break out of but, I see as you discover more your world and the world of writing it out, you are coming back to being alive, healthy and whole. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
Chains are a tough thing to break out of but, I see as you discover more your world and the world of writing it out, you are coming back to being alive, healthy and whole. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks again miss kiwi for your fine review and Tom doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this essay, introducing two works, about depression and praying to God and about unbearable pain that author does not care for God above is there ever; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
In this essay, introducing two works, about depression and praying to God and about unbearable pain that author does not care for God above is there ever; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks very much I'll for your wonderful time and review dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
"But, I fear not dear Lord and I have not a care!"
"Even though I'm so tired but I know You are there!"
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"But it seems Lord...
"It seems as it if...
"I'm at my own funeral Pyre?"
"Barbed Wire!"
This is a great, though tragic poem. Well done Ricky. I read this avidly. Better formatting too. Kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
"But, I fear not dear Lord and I have not a care!"
"Even though I'm so tired but I know You are there!"
...
"But it seems Lord...
"It seems as it if...
"I'm at my own funeral Pyre?"
"Barbed Wire!"
This is a great, though tragic poem. Well done Ricky. I read this avidly. Better formatting too. Kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks for this Mia as always yours talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from royowen
The feeling of stress is an old friend of mine, but I've generally dealt with "stranger in the woodpile very well really" I guess because whatever I've been through, Jesus suffering was mine multiplied ad finitum, so it eases mine, knowing He suffered on my behalf. Well done Ricky, a very stark but articulately and strongly phrased work you've written here my friend, good job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
The feeling of stress is an old friend of mine, but I've generally dealt with "stranger in the woodpile very well really" I guess because whatever I've been through, Jesus suffering was mine multiplied ad finitum, so it eases mine, knowing He suffered on my behalf. Well done Ricky, a very stark but articulately and strongly phrased work you've written here my friend, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks Roy very much appreciated and happy New Year
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You too Ricky.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Burning, that's the word. YOur passionate wording makes us realize the pain and torment that you have carried and that makes us feel kindred
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
Burning, that's the word. YOur passionate wording makes us realize the pain and torment that you have carried and that makes us feel kindred
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks much for but hope you're having a wonderful happy new year so far Ricky