I Ain't Ready for This
Country music for Old Farts16 total reviews
Comment from fluffnstuff
had to give a sixer on this one! It is a funny one that brought a smile to this face for sure. wishing you all the luck for a winner in the contest. taketh care fluff
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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had to give a sixer on this one! It is a funny one that brought a smile to this face for sure. wishing you all the luck for a winner in the contest. taketh care fluff
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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thank you so much! greatly appreciate your neat review and the 6!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun song that I think all of us who are above the age of fifty can relate to. *smile* I think we have to laugh to keep from crying, right?? haha! Thanks and good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun song that I think all of us who are above the age of fifty can relate to. *smile* I think we have to laugh to keep from crying, right?? haha! Thanks and good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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thanks, Robyn
I ain't ready for it, either!
Comment from janalma
Another good one. I love your sense of humor. And if somebody in country music doesn't pick up on this one and sing it, I'll be disappointed. Very well done in my uneducated opinion.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Another good one. I love your sense of humor. And if somebody in country music doesn't pick up on this one and sing it, I'll be disappointed. Very well done in my uneducated opinion.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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Bless you! And thanks for the vote of confidence! Wish I knew who to send it to.
OOO - and thanks for the 6! so sorry I don't have any reviewer recs left. The end of the month always leaves me without.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I think this has potential. . . I tried to sing along but parts of it just don't quite work for me. It's a good start. One place for sure that I kept saying when I sang along was the last line (which I really like) "and I just got finished off a-loadin' up my wife. I had fun trying to sing along.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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I think this has potential. . . I tried to sing along but parts of it just don't quite work for me. It's a good start. One place for sure that I kept saying when I sang along was the last line (which I really like) "and I just got finished off a-loadin' up my wife. I had fun trying to sing along.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2017
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well, the way I "sing" it, the meter works just fine. I've gotten a bunch of sixes so apparently it works for some others. I'm sorry it didn't for you - truly - wish I knew how to write music and you tube it so you could see what I mean.
Am going to see how your version of the last line "sounds.".
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I would really like to hear you sing it on youtube. If you get it figured out let me know. I do okay with music but there's a reason I don't write it. :) Maybe this will be your debut and the next time I hear it, you'll be in Vegas. :)
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laughing. That'll be the day. Maybe, If I'm lucky I'll find somebody who plays the guitar and writes songs.
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And they will give those lyrics the perfect tune they deserve. :)
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thank you!!!!!!
Comment from Agnes Card
Brilliant! Wonderful quirkiness, love the rhyming language, the rhythms and the dialect, all meshed together, can hear this on the ole guitar, I'd enjoy listening, do you have a tune to go with it?
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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Brilliant! Wonderful quirkiness, love the rhyming language, the rhythms and the dialect, all meshed together, can hear this on the ole guitar, I'd enjoy listening, do you have a tune to go with it?
Comment Written 22-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
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thank you! And thanks a lot for the 6! Nope -wish I did have a tune. And nary a friend with a guitar.
Comment from oliver818
I like your lyrics, I think they are really cool. They make for an interesting song, something I'm sure pep would want to listen to. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I like your lyrics, I think they are really cool. They make for an interesting song, something I'm sure pep would want to listen to. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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thank you
Comment from LIJ Red
How many movies has old Sam been in, from Roadhouse to Tombstone? Good luck in the contest. Learned about a new ailment lately, Gouty Arther Itis. Excellent post.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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How many movies has old Sam been in, from Roadhouse to Tombstone? Good luck in the contest. Learned about a new ailment lately, Gouty Arther Itis. Excellent post.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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oh brother. so sorry.
Old Sam might not like my poem, but I thought his picture had just the right touch.
Take care.
pl
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is good, but I can't picture a melody that would go with it, but then, I never can come up with a melody, so take that for what it's worth. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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This is good, but I can't picture a melody that would go with it, but then, I never can come up with a melody, so take that for what it's worth. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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thank you. I can't either. If I could, I''d one-finger it on my granddaughter's key board.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun song lyrics. When we can joke around abput our age. We still hVd that inner child with us who always looking for fun things to do. Arthur Itis skipped me, but I have other problems that keep.me seated.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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A very well-written fun song lyrics. When we can joke around abput our age. We still hVd that inner child with us who always looking for fun things to do. Arthur Itis skipped me, but I have other problems that keep.me seated.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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afraid my inner child is/has been a permanent fixture.
thanks for your nice review and best wishes to you.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Too funny! This could be a winner! All us "old" folk can truly appreciate Arthur Itis' lament! You've captured in lyrical humor recollections of the past and reality of the present! Love it!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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Too funny! This could be a winner! All us "old" folk can truly appreciate Arthur Itis' lament! You've captured in lyrical humor recollections of the past and reality of the present! Love it!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2017
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thank you so much for your great review. Much appreciated.