Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Too Much Nonsense"a place to gather my poetic forms
36 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Luna, I am the first to admit I don't know much about poetry and the many forms, and this is one I never come across before. But you held my attention with your lovely words. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Hi Luna, I am the first to admit I don't know much about poetry and the many forms, and this is one I never come across before. But you held my attention with your lovely words. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Ulla. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this and thank you for your gracious review.
Comment from azwildrosa
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What a great read. I love the play on word. What funny is when I look left, I see my boy who I'm sure would love to play pogo. Thank you for sharing. I'm always looking forward to your reads.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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What a great read. I love the play on word. What funny is when I look left, I see my boy who I'm sure would love to play pogo. Thank you for sharing. I'm always looking forward to your reads.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2017
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LOL thanks for the review, that is funny, I'm sure he would indeed like to play!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Jeni - yet another poetry form - one from you this time. I see it dedicated to Karen - the bride wore black - I'm sure she will read the meaning behind this phrase LOL. Well written with much good alliteration, as I would expect in a poem called an Alliterisen. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni - yet another poetry form - one from you this time. I see it dedicated to Karen - the bride wore black - I'm sure she will read the meaning behind this phrase LOL. Well written with much good alliteration, as I would expect in a poem called an Alliterisen. Well done. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Oh, yes, Karen would understand this. I thank you for reading my poem and giving me this lovely reviewl
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Jeni
We called them pixies too, when I was a kid. We lived in a neighborhood bordering the forest, and all the kids knew about the pixies who began to dance among the toadstools come dark. I wrote a children's poem called "Pixie Dust" way back in my portfolio/2010.
I like the alliteration, especially
"Mother moon"... that stands out to me because I've always referred to the moon as being masculine (the man in the moon).
You tell a story of their own little world, these dainty wee people totally separate from us. It's magic.
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Hi Jeni
We called them pixies too, when I was a kid. We lived in a neighborhood bordering the forest, and all the kids knew about the pixies who began to dance among the toadstools come dark. I wrote a children's poem called "Pixie Dust" way back in my portfolio/2010.
I like the alliteration, especially
"Mother moon"... that stands out to me because I've always referred to the moon as being masculine (the man in the moon).
You tell a story of their own little world, these dainty wee people totally separate from us. It's magic.
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Kimbob. I appreciate that you read my poem and left such a gracious review.
Comment from Fridayauthor
The complexity of this short poem really makes you look at each and every word!
You did a great job here with a choice of words that paint a delightful picture. The image you chose adds even more to your posting.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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The complexity of this short poem really makes you look at each and every word!
You did a great job here with a choice of words that paint a delightful picture. The image you chose adds even more to your posting.
Thank you!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank YOU for reading my poem and leaving such a kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure that took some time to get right, it is very cleverly done. Anything to do with fairies and pixies, goblins and all, pulls me in, I love reading poetry and stories about them. This was a fun one and well written. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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I'm sure that took some time to get right, it is very cleverly done. Anything to do with fairies and pixies, goblins and all, pulls me in, I love reading poetry and stories about them. This was a fun one and well written. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Yep, Sandra, it took about 3 hours. I'm happy that you enjoye, and thank you for the review.
Comment from Pantygynt
It seems you have achieved your alliterative andsyllabic aims here. I suppose it is two much to ask that it should actually make some sort of sense. I looked left and saw not pretty pixies but my poor printer needing new ink. An interesting intellectual challenge and you managed to work in some rhymes as well, so well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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It seems you have achieved your alliterative andsyllabic aims here. I suppose it is two much to ask that it should actually make some sort of sense. I looked left and saw not pretty pixies but my poor printer needing new ink. An interesting intellectual challenge and you managed to work in some rhymes as well, so well done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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That's why the poem is named what it's named. I tried to have it make sense and have a better flow, but...did my best and I appreciate your read and review, as always.
JLM
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Mr Lear made an enviable reputation on nonsense. Lol.
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As did Ted Geisel!
Comment from William Ross
very good on this complex aliterisen and the line syllable count chosen to use, Works out very well on this. Thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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very good on this complex aliterisen and the line syllable count chosen to use, Works out very well on this. Thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Hey Bill, you have a great day as well! Thanks for taking time out of your day to read and review my poem.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from mbroyles2
Truly lovely.
What terrific images you give us.
"flying fairies cleverly caroling "
Great.
Simply beautiful.
Great job Luna
Michael
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Truly lovely.
What terrific images you give us.
"flying fairies cleverly caroling "
Great.
Simply beautiful.
Great job Luna
Michael
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Why, thank you, Michael! I'm flattered by your gracious review. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful fantasy tale with magical lines and loving words that make your poem soothing and a pleasure to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A beautiful fantasy tale with magical lines and loving words that make your poem soothing and a pleasure to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much for your gracious review, Dolly. I hope you have a great day.
love and light,
jeni
